Comments | lark01: The next run is here....read it and weep...tell all your friends....lol

lark01

The next run is here....read it and weep...tell all your friends....lol

Jan 26, 2005 12:57

I hope this doesn't give away the ending....lol...the ending is a long way from here. Read, enjoy, comment....what do you like and what can be better.
Thanks everyone.
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Comments 7

chang_lee_ninja January 27 2005, 10:32:39 UTC

cool.

Maybe throw a link to the first part of the story. Not sure if I read it before. I don't remember the last thing ya wrote, but know I commented on it.

pretty easy to find lark01 January 27 2005, 11:42:28 UTC

most of the posts over the last couple of weeks that have links similar to this one are story parts...i don't generally cut my personal posts, even the really long ones.
it is easier to go back 6-8 posts in my journal than follow a link. personal opinion, you know what they say about those....everybody's got one.

pel

Re: pretty easy to find chang_lee_ninja January 31 2005, 09:02:45 UTC

yep, opinions are like armpits...everyone has a couple and they stink.

boredmama January 27 2005, 17:20:22 UTC

ok.........I liked this part as well but maybe its my headache but im not catching a hint for the ending. Hmmm....it may be be that I still have 'blonde' in me..lol.......we all know I have those tendancies 99% of the time. Keeeeeeep writing. I cant wait to print out all the sections and put the story into one big piece :)

The ending... lark01 January 29 2005, 07:12:52 UTC

Is a long way off...we are still in the very very very first part of character development....there are lost of things that haven't happened yet...lots characters...well ok a few main characters that have not even been introduced yet. This part of the story doesn't even have a hint of the plot of the story yet...let alone the ending...that comment about giving away the ending was kind of a joke...sorry if it confused you.

I should not take advantage of your diminished ability to separate blonde from regular moments...lol

smooches, keep reading

pel

Re: The ending... boredmama January 29 2005, 08:58:01 UTC

im always confused these days........too much crap to deal with. As far as blonde moments...im thinking its more of a norm right now??!!

of course il keep reading u silly man.........*smoooch*

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Re: typo? :) lark01 June 11 2009, 14:49:59 UTC

"her" being Nesbitt College.