I am full of them today, evidently

[lark01]

I am thinking of posting some writing on my journal and would like to invite those of you that regularly view this little slice of heaven....(yes, I am talking to both of you!!!! hehe) to read as much or as little as you want and offer your honest opinion on the story and any criticisms that you care to share. I can tell you that the intention is to, in the end, have a finished work. Bear in mind as you read, that the story is what it is, and it has been rolling around in this big old melon of mine for a while and needs to get out. The story will be in rough, unedited (except for spelling and stuff, coz I hate reading things and having to stop to figure out what that word was supposed to be) and in its first form, so don't get too nuts over formal style and all that shit. It is a rather hard story to explain, but I can tell you that it has lots of different elements and some research heavy stuff in it, that may change over time as I do more research and learn more about the different things that I am trying to incorporate in the story. I think it is a safe bet that the XXX industry will not be banging my door down to get to this story, but there may be a little sauce for those of you that are so inclined....lol

Let me know what you think. I will try to keep the installments short enough to be comfortable...but no guarantees on the frequency of submissions...just so you know. I may start tomorrow...and I may not...depending on your responses to this one.

Thanks everyone
pel