(Batman fic) Speak, chapter 16

[larissafae]

Title: Speak
Author: larissafae
Fandom: Batman, Nolanverse.
Pairing: Jack/Rachel
Chapter rating: R.
Final word count: 69,495
Warnings: Light bondage-ish play, lots and lots of fluff. Out the ears, I mean.
Disclaimer: If they were mine, this wouldn't be a fanfic, now, would it?
Summary: A rehabilitated Jack Napier is brought into police custody after his

Comments

[emma1794]

Wow, so they're actually married! D'aww that's sweet! But I know it's not going to end there...(obviously, because you're planning a sequel! XD) This was another great chapter; but I don't like to call it the 'end' chapter; it is merely the prelude to something EVEN MORE (I hope) dramatic and tense and humorous and well written. Because that's what this entire fic has been! I've had such great pleasure reading it.

I loved the way Jack proposed, by the way. It was so him. And romantic in a way that only Jack can be.

But I just know there's something of the Joker still lurking under the surface...something dark and scary, like a huge hairy monster...and I leave it up to you to explore this in your sequel (which I'm sure you will). And I still don't think that Harleen's death has been necessarily resolved. I still need closure on that one. ;)

Well, I'm all reviewed out. And I'm sure you're all posted/typed out, so go and get some sleep. And then start writing. Mwuahahahah!

Seriously though, I've loved all of this. :D

[larissafae]

Heh, lol, Jack Dawes . . . that's funny. Better than Rachel Napier. Ew. I hadn't actually thought or said those names out loud until now, but wow, I'm glad I went with Jack Dawes. ^^;;

Omg, Jack Dawson . . . CRAP, now I'm thinking Titanic meets Speak! SHIT, I need to pee and SLEEP!

[emma1794]

Yeah, I actually LOVE Jaw Dawes! And I agree, soo much better sounding than Rachel Napier.

Shit, a Titanic/Speak crossover would be seriously cracky.

Pee and sleep, dear, pee and sleep. (I think I need sleep as well. It's 11.30pm over here in England. D:)

[larissafae]

Glad you agree. Pee has been accomplished, now to reply to more reviews *happy dance* and then sleep. Maybe. Up over 24 hours and I'm still not tired. Bah . . .

And if YOU want to write a Speak/Titanic crossover, I'm not stopping you. ^_^

Re: Applause....

[larissafae]

Dude . . . I totally read "Applesauce" as the title of your post . . . And she took more than one day off to take care of him, but yes, she's a sweetheart. Good little sub, taking care of her dom. I didn't mean for it to turn into a BDSM relationship. I think I'm a closet sub . . . oh, well . . .

I'm so sleepy still . . .

Yeah, the town is actually a very small town up in Humboldt County, CA, because I didn't want to be creative and think of a name, but they're not in Cali. Rachel's gonna go on a business trip there (omgphonesexliekwhoa), but.

I can't tell you about the nesting, I really can't. But whatever the outcome, it will be good.

*hugs tight* Thank you so much, lovey. I really appraciate all your wonderful reviews and insights and whatnot. ^_^ I'll get chapter 1 out as soon as I can.

Re: Applause....

[larissafae]

Sub!Jack, huh? . . . I think I can do that, just for you. ^___^ I mean, he'll find the whole thing to be hilarious, Rachel trying to be dom . . . but I can do that.

I don't mind the name Napier, but Rachel Napier just doesn't fit. ^^;; Oh, well.

Yay applesauce! *OMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOM!!!!*

[crazy_carolyn_s]

Bwuahahaha, I loved the line where Rory was too terrified to get out from under the couch. xD And Gordon called Hideki a maid of honor? Harsh! >:P LOL Very, very sweet...I'm a romantic at heart, so I obviously didn't mind. ;0) And a pony? Like...as in kink? Cuz that might be kinda weird, haha. But I like the name for the new fic, and am curious to see where it goes. *nods*

[larissafae]

I wanted to imply that there was wild, wilkd nookie without writing it out, Hideki and Raoul are the best-known secret in Gotham City, and the pony was a request for an actual pony to be in the fic, non-kink.

^___^

[larissafae]

I'm not a bitch, I'm a Leo.

And, uh . . . I don't know about the never getting laid part. I mean, I'd totally do you for your awesome reviews alone, if it's any comfort. ^_~

And no, she's not addicted to sex, and thanks for pointing that out to me. I'll bring it up in Sing. I also left the loose ends because I was planning on a sequel anyway, so there wasn't a huge need to make everything neat and tidy. And two years, I felt was a long enough time. *nodnod* That makes her . . . shit, was she turning 35? So almost 37 . . . crap, Rachel's old. ^_^ Don't tell my Mom I said 37 was old; she'd kill me and then you'd NEVER get your loose ends tied up.

Mwuahahaha. I'm trying to start chapter 1 of Speak. I'll start posting around chapter 3 or 4.

[larissafae]

Oh, but we clash in such a GOOD way! ^__^ I'm a really easygoing Leo, anyway.

And yeah, I got the e-mail and sent a reply. Italics didn't make it through at all, but if you put * instead, I'll format it and post it here, see if it works, then send it back to you once I figger it out. ^_^

Anything for my favourite reviewer, after all.

Hell, let's jump right in to explaining that Rachel isn't addicted to sex or Jack.

Heh, Jack Dawes, lol . . .

[medium_density]

Heh...I love it. I also love the promise of more hi-jinx to come!
:)

[larissafae]

It'll happen, lovey, it'll happen. ^___^ And thank you so much!