FIC: Tea in the Day Room (SP)

Apr 07, 2012 23:30

I must beg your forgiveness. As you know, all of these stories are just world building for the ideas that have been in my head lately. I came to a point, last round of writerverse, that required something of the plot I'd come up with. The problem I ran into was that I still needed to world build! There are still things in my head that I haven't ( Read more... )

streetlight people, challenge, writerverse, original, 2012

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hhhellcat April 8 2012, 10:24:05 UTC
Ugh, cliffhanger indeed! I do appreciate more insight to Cyril Ann's family and how she got her title. Curious as heck about Daphne and especially this Mr. Gibbons. I'm wondering if her mother is truly in on this 'encounter' or if she's been manipulated into it by Daphne.

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riverotter1951 April 10 2012, 14:11:27 UTC
This is marvelous. The contrast between how her father and her mother deal with his becoming the Commander show the difference in their personalities. Cyril Ann seems to balance between their very different lifestyles. The gap has widened between Cyril Ann and her mother making her wary when it turns out that her mother sent for her.

Will Cyril Ann's two lives collide? Why is the clergyman visiting?

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