Fic: Finding (parts 1-3)

[lar_laughs]

These are set prior to anything written so far. Xie hasn't been to prison yet. All of these were written specifically for the prompts but they all go together so I put them into one prompt.

Comments

[hhhellcat]

Hmm, yes, it feels like you know Aja a lot better in a sense than I've felt with the others you've shared thus far. The explanation of the magic helps, gives me a firmer grasp on some of the 'rules' of this verse.

The fact that she's sight impaired also makes you have to work harder to paint a picture of what's going on, not for the reader necessarily, but for Aja. In doing so, you make the story more vivid for me, too, and I like that. :)