Fic: Back From the Edge

Apr 11, 2011 23:32

Title: Back From the Edge
Author: lar_laughs
Recipient's name: da_angel729 at the satedan_grabass Think-A-Thon
The prompts used: Slash - John & Ronon on Earth with Dave; protective John; and a sort of "glad we didn't die" post-Search & Rescue shag if you sort of look at it through narrowed eyes.
Rating: R
Word Count: ~5000
Warnings: some language
Author's Note: I would like to give a ( Read more... )

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gaffsie April 12 2011, 15:35:04 UTC
Hah! I love that Dave is looking out for John despite their rocky relationship. ♥ Brotherly love.

It was really cute the way Ronon and Dave bonded over decent beer too. Poor Ronon must have been so relieved to find someone who drank something different than just Budweiser.

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lar_laughs April 13 2011, 03:49:51 UTC
Ronon as a beer snob. Who wouldda thunk it? *grins*

Glad you liked it!

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mistokath13 April 12 2011, 18:16:24 UTC
I really really like how you portray those relationships, between Ronon and John and their miscommunications and how they worry about the other, and between John and his brother and how they are both trying to get along, and how Dave is looking out for John.

Also:
"Do you want the list alphabetically or by the length of jail time that goes with the crime?" made me snort with laughter.

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lar_laughs April 13 2011, 03:46:56 UTC
Thank you!

And couldn't you just see Woolsey saying that with a completely straight face? I love giving him funny things to say.

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lar_laughs April 13 2011, 04:09:49 UTC
So all that lurking on your journal paid off!!! *grins* One thing I love about this pair is the way they treat each other. There's plenty of that manly sort of affection on the TV show and I can imagine that would transfer to their private lives as well.

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the great prompts!

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kimberlite April 13 2011, 05:36:13 UTC
Loved all the relationships here and how they found their footing again after so much angst.

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lar_laughs April 14 2011, 03:16:33 UTC
Thanks! Love that the angst can have some happiness at the end!

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jendavis April 16 2011, 04:10:23 UTC
I really love this quite a lot. Every single word. :) *bookmarks*

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lar_laughs April 16 2011, 05:32:32 UTC
Thank you! I don't think I've ever been bookmarked before! Very cool! Glad you liked it.

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