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Skeletons in the Closet
Chapter Twenty (final chapter)
By: Lazuli
PG/PG-13
Wow, so we come to the end of this story… I hope that you all enjoy this final chapter, that it answers any questions and leaves you fulfilled. I’ve had a great time writing this and so until the next time~
Naruto does not belong to me, but credit goes to ”proud_snapist” for her hard ( Read more... )
First off, I LOVE your writing style! Personal yet organized very nicely^^. It kept everyone in character, even in some...er, unusual... moments, lol. I have to say, Naruto and Sasuke's banter is what really made me feel their relationship so that defiantly showed off your wonderfully realistic dialouge skills. Your writing started out just a bit on the shaky side but really improved throughout the entire story so much it had me grinning ear to ear when I looked back over some chapters XD. Nice spelling and grammer as well, so a bizillion plus points for that because it is so hard to find a well-written fic that doesn't have me banging my head on the keyboard!! *worships*
Plotwise, well, twists much? Hahaha. Confusion abounded in the start of the last chapter but when it finally got the 'Ahhhh!' moment it was so great! It was nice to see you put our poor reading brains to work to show this wasn't a mindless fluff read (..not that there's anything WRONG with that *shifty eyes*). Speaking of fluff, the NaruSasu moments turned out not to be the prominant storyline in this fic, which was wonderfully refreshing in some ways and slightly frusterating in some ways, because, hun, you write those make out scenes GOOD. REALLY GOOD. And Naruto as Seme? Marry me now, please.
As mentioned before, I would not change a thing about how the characters are written because they flow beautifully and every line had me on the edge of my seat... *leans in conspiratorly* and Aki? Pure love, dude. A mini Neiji?! Hellya! XD Sakura was a nice touch of familiarity, and the jutsu? Brilliant, just brilliant. Seems like something she would do ^^.
*Shakes out fingers* Hahaha, like my essay? I hope my drug induced mind produced something more then a mindless rant in awe of your work... right? *sweatdrop* Anyways, this is one of the best endings EVER, by the way and I look forward to more of your work which I will be stalking XD! And if you ever run out of beta's, feel free to ask! *Is shamelessly looking for a way to see more writing*
See you, chicka! And thanks for the awesome read!
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Wow... I... *rubs back of head and blushes*
Thank you so much for your compliments on my story! ^_^ It's always wonderful to have such in depth comments and to see that someone really enjoyed my writing. ^___^
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