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astrum_presul in lantean_manor

Swimming Lessons 2/2

Sep 17, 2006 22:47

( Swimming Lessons part 2 )

Comments 27

joyfulfeather September 18 2006, 02:54:11 UTC

*tackles* It's still fantastic. :D PORN! Heehee. Yay!

astrum_presul September 20 2006, 01:52:51 UTC

*tackles more*

Good. That's the response I was hoping to get! :)

hehee, right back at ya!

miera_c September 18 2006, 03:34:08 UTC

That was hot. And funny and nicely realistic (the whole awkward angles, banging ungracefully into the pool wall, etc.) without losing any of the hotness.

"You had to put on a sports bra, didn't you?" he muttered, nipping at her mouth.

BWAH! I loved that. It's always so convenient that women are always wearing a front-closure bra in these moments, innit?

And did I mention outdoor sex in the empty pool was really hot? *g*

Also how come he didn't show up while *I* was taking a bath last night and needed a foot rub? *pouts at universe*

astrum_presul September 25 2006, 01:30:34 UTC

Thank you! :)

I'm so glad that the more realistic details worked out well, I was a little concerned that they would detract from the smuttiness of it, but didn't really want to be writing stuff that didn't even seem anatomically possible.

*grin* Thanks very much.

Hah! I know! I wouldn't have minded the calf massage last week after the walk from the MARTA station back to campus. *ponders how to clone Pool!Boy John*

miera_c September 25 2006, 01:44:30 UTC

*g* It's been my experience that it's actually more distracting to not take care of those details, because otherwise people stop and go "Wait, how did...?" and get thrown out of the story.

astrum_presul September 25 2006, 19:25:44 UTC

*big grin* Then I'm extra glad I had it go that way. Thanks! :)

vickysg1 September 18 2006, 12:44:42 UTC

That fic was hot! I love how John bring the adventurous side of Emizabeth out with her flying the plane and then sex outdoors!
And Laura's such a teaser!

astrum_presul September 25 2006, 01:31:20 UTC

:) Woo! Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks very much for telling me so!

trialia September 18 2006, 20:43:37 UTC

You're very welcome, sweetheart. I still love it. I hope your cold's feeling a bit better. *huggles and provides more nyquil*

astrum_presul September 25 2006, 19:07:26 UTC

:) Thanks. I am feeling better. It only took a week, even! :)

*hug*

ankareeda September 18 2006, 22:14:09 UTC

*w00t* That was plain hot! Awesome work! *squee*

astrum_presul September 25 2006, 19:08:32 UTC

*grin* Thank you very much!