gravity | damon/elena/stefan | t | p2/2

[laniaaa]

Gravity
Part Two of Two
Part One of Two Here
Damon/Elena/Stefan | T | ~12 000k+
'But I am not a prize to be won, Damon, and I think you need to understand that.' She's not being cruel, she's being honest, and she believes that Damon needs to hear this. That Stefan should hear this, too.

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[lovingdelena88]

oh wow, i don't know where to began. First of all, will you marry me? lol, i'm dead serious though.
I both love and hate this for so many reasons, just like the show. But i think that's what makes it great. The ability to bring out conflicting emotions is quite powerful. The writers of the show do it every minute on the show. You wanna kiss and kill them at the same time.

You seemed to have great insight into the characters especially Elena. That poor girl's been through so much crap, all 1 or 2 years, and oh yeah, she's only 18. I think sometimes we forget that, seriously if I was in her shoes, I probably would have killed myself. (I'm catholic, I'M STRONGLY AGAINST SUICIDE), but come on. I'm 23, I can't deal with a fraction of what she has to deal with, in a weekly basis. I was so angry with her after the whole "loving me is a problem thing", cause I seriously thought she should have known better, she knows Damon, better than anyone. But after calming down, and screaming and calling her an ungrateful bitch. Then I calmed myself down, and put myself in her shoes.

It's not easy being Elena Gilbert, it's not easy loosing every family members every other episode, it's not easy loving TWO brothers, same two brothers who loved her doppelganger. It's a fucked up situation, and someone will always ended up hurt no matter what. It's not called a drama for no reason.

I love the delena moments, being totally honest with each other no matter how much it hurts.
And being turned on by each other, their physical attraction is the easiest. They are insanely attracted people who wants to fuck each others brains.

I was not expecting Stefan walking on them while they were in bed. That was genius of you.

I love strong Elena, standing for herself and telling them off. She is not some object to be won, she's fucking person with real fucking feelings. They need to understand that.
And did I detect slight incest tone, or was that just me?

'It wants what it wants,' adds Stefan, and looks at his brother evenly. Elena is almost suspicious.

Damon looks down quickly before looking back up with defiant and honest eyes.

'That it does.'

That could have been me, I'm not ashamed to say, that TVD fandom have corrupted my young, innocent mind (insert wink here).
And i love the family component, they all love each other. Especially Damon and Stefan, they are brothers and will always be. They have been for over a century and more. They fucking love each other, they will die for each other any day of the week, they will hate each other. I seriously think they are the true love story of the show.

So yeah, this was amazing, your writing is fucking perfection.
I may not agree with everything you write, but i think that makes it better.

[laniaaa]

I both love and hate this for so many reasons, just like the show. But i think that's what makes it great. The ability to bring out conflicting emotions is quite powerful. The writers of the show do it every minute on the show. You wanna kiss and kill them at the same time. this is kind of exactly how i feel about the show and what i've written. i'm so, so glad that you see that, i really am.

elena is totally her own person, and a lot of people just use her as someone to ship with one brother. like, 'elena should be with him,' or, 'not, he needs her more!' what about her? what about what she wants and needs as a woman? what if it's neither of them?

originally stefan never was going to be in it, it was going to stop at them going to sleep, but i couldn't end it there. it felt unfinished, i felt like i was going against what i thought all over again. stefan needed to come in, it needed to be resolved and both brothers needed to listen to her talk.

young innocent minds? ;) hahaha, it wasn't too obvious, was it? i mean, it wasn't supposed to be blatant or the main point or anything, it was kind of a mix between that, between damon and stefan always wanting to care for each other even when they're furious at one another, and it was also a bit of, 'yes, my heart does want this girl, and i'm letting you know it.' it could be interpreted either way, but i tend to lean more towards the former, with a sprinkling of the latter.

thank you so much for reading this and commenting! ♥ and marriage, well... ;)