So The Fast Dance Won't Last But Never Means Forever (Damon/Elena Fanfic) 1/1

Jul 21, 2010 14:44

Title: So The Fast Dance Won't Last But Never Means Forever
Author: laniaaa 
Rating: MA+
Category: Drama/Romance/Mild Humor
Summary: "Elena," he murmurs, and his voice is husky, "if I'm going to fuck you against your dresser, I think you might want to take your pretty little pastel panties off."
Spoilers: Set straight after "Miss Mystic Falls."
Warnings:  ( Read more... )

tv show: the vampire diaries, fanfiction: damon/elena

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cassiakohn July 21 2010, 03:30:22 UTC
hell yeah! now that was fun!

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laniaaa July 21 2010, 05:14:21 UTC
haha, i definitely had fun writing it :D

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laniaaa July 21 2010, 06:18:29 UTC
thank you! i worry a lot about characterizations, so i'm glad that i seem to have got them right :)

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dulcedeusex July 21 2010, 12:58:00 UTC
Discovered this via a rec on the Damon/Elena community. The build up to the nookie scene was intense and I loved post-naughty sex Elena. I also liked the comaparison Damon drew to Katherine because I too have been wondering about her having "a Salvatore on each arm".

Why the fuck is he still going?! "I care about you, Elena. That's why." Stop. Talking. Now. He makes a mental note to practice holding his tongue later.

He's a little too caught up with the mental image of himself trying to hold his own tongue, that he's mildly suprised when Elena steps towards him, enveloping him warmly. He stands still, unsure of whether he's supposed to reciprocate.

"This is the part," she mumbles, "where you hug me back."

He does so carefully. Then with more intent. He allows himself to bury his nose in her hair, breathe in deeply, have his hands on her body for that fleeting moment. Then she pulls back and it's gone. He composes his face quickly. -- Other than the initial cellphone convo which I thought was so very in character, this was my ( ... )

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laniaaa July 22 2010, 09:37:25 UTC
i've always wanted to expand on the the idea of katherine/both brothers, as well as that of elena. i think there would be more similarities than people think, but incredibly vast differences that could be played with to a huge extent.
i''m glad you liked it so much, thank you :)

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strangedazey July 21 2010, 13:43:49 UTC
FTW! That was some of the best I've read in awhile. Wonderful, hot as hell, funny and touching. Loved the part where he almost told her he loved her, then caught himself. I could so see that happening on the show. Brava!

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laniaaa July 22 2010, 09:40:29 UTC
haha, i'mg glad you thought so! i love letting emotional highs peek through in damon's character, only for him to hide them as or cover them up as quickly as possible :L thanks! i'm pleased you liked it :)

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monnalisa813 July 21 2010, 17:17:21 UTC
Very nice. I like the little banter about the colour of her bra. This is nicely written.

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laniaaa July 22 2010, 09:40:58 UTC
:D thank you very much! :)

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