OH GOD SMUT, HERE IT IS

[lamenthatic]

It's been a while, I know, I was so nervous about posting my first sex scene. Yup, time for explicit Beast/Belle loving. Ahem, my wonderful Beta TrudiRose wasn't available to screen this one, so it might be a little rough around the edges. So let me know what you think. Thanks for sticking with me for so long!

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Comments

Oh YES!

[anonymous]

I found your fic on facebook, looked it up on AFF to see if there were any more chapters, and followed you here hopefully.....but not yet! This is the BEST BEST BEST lemony take on their relationship EVAH, and the best part is that it's written so elegantly and yummily, not all "his throbbing thingy" and "yeah beast give it to me uh uh uh!" (its always a buzzkill when you go to AFF and find a hot obscure pairing only to get the most juvenile writing and gratuitously obscene/out-of-place terms). Sooooo yours is so so wonderful, and I can't believe I found such an awesome combination of sophisticated storytelling and SMUT SMUT SMUT. This chapter was so hot and you are such a tease! You must update SOON.

As to feedback: I was quite disappointed that Belle turned Beast's offer down, I don't believe she was able to actually do it! I think the next chapter should definitely have her getting off with some kind of (ugh, all the terms are so ugly - "dryhumping," "outercourse" etc.) *rubbing* up against him like you teased us with in a previous chapter. Please pretty please? It is just cruel to make Beast so sexy and eager to please his lady, yet get turned down. But above all, MORE and SOON.