Edward's POV (Love Net)

[lalinacullen]

I stared at the computer screen in complete shock.

Hey Sexy,

Guess who’s going to be in LA Feb 13-15? Want to be my Valentine? ;))

B.

I minimized the screen, pushed back from my desk and walked out of my barrack into the bright sunshine. Standing there I pinched the bridge of my nose between my fingers and mentally berated myself.

What the fuck are you

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[gowna07]

Oyyy. Belledward here. Oh, no.

Just to start this off, I apologize for getting so worked up! It's just because your writing is SO good! And it's so good to read something that I can relate to in so many ways. Not to the extreme lol, but in many, many ways, this was me just a few years back. You write this so realistically. And as this is written through Bella's POV, I feel like I'm experiencing all the fear and hurt and anger and the whole damn roller coaster weeees again. I think that's such a good thing because I can really see the situation playing out.

On to the story:

I am VERY VERY upset with Edward. His intentions in starting this 'thing' between them has never been good. I understand that, but that doesn't mean the bastard had to lie about all this shit. He might as well have lied about his sole identity (as I have experienced)! Dammit! Dammit, Edward! Lies, lies, and more lies. Will they ever stop?

The fake phone number. OMG. That about TIPPED me over! I seriously wanted to rip him apart and feed him to the pigs and feed the pigs to the shark just so he would really be a goner. I was VERY upset with him because of this. How dare he?!? He could have just told the girl that he wasn't ready to go in that direction yet. There's nothing wrong with stating the truth or a fact. Instead, he lied like a little bitch and manipulated her.

GRR.

And they're still living together? Him and Tanya? Guh! Does it ever end?!?!?!?? What I REALLY want to know is if he really went through with the divorce. Dammit. He is unfuckingbelievable.

From EPOV, I really saw the whole 'if you never want to see me again' as a guilt trip. And I understand that Bella can't help herself, but she does need to show a little self-control. This is nothing to play around with! She's really gotta step back and take a look at this. She cannot be too easy with him. Please!

Okay, so I'm totally seeing them as for-reals characters lol which is a compliment to your writing because I love that it's so realistic.

So I'm getting even more worked up. HFFFFF. Please, PLEEEEAAASE let Bella be strong.

[lalinacullen]

It's ok to get worked up, this isn't an easy subject for a lot of ppl. Add to that the beloved Twi characters and it's even a bit more hard :))

Just to clarify, it really wasn't a guilt trip. Edward obviously doesn't want Bella to leave but he knew it wasn't fair of him to ask her to stay due to the situation. He knows there is a good chance Bella won't want to be w/ him any longer.

Thank you for the compliments, it makes me happy that you are getting all the emotions behind everything that is happening. The latest chapter will be up soon :))