Preaching to Sinners on the End of the World (5/?) Part 3

[lalaljay]

Title: Preaching to Sinners on the End of the World (5/?) Part 3
Author: lalaljay
Pairing: outcast!self-conscious!Frank/popular!Gerard
Rating: Mature/NC-17ish
Warning: Language (if that even counts), Brief conversation about suicide (don't worry I don't kill anyone off), the things NC-17 would have you assume
Disclaimer: I've never bought a group of people

Comments

[high_on_mcr]

You know, in the beginning, all I wanted to do was smack the shit out of Gerard.

But as I read further, I could say I kind of understood his situation. It's like, he's living a double/secret life. He has to be one way for his family and friends, then he's another with Frank.

But then I question, which way would he rather be?

Even though I kind of understand Gerard's situation, I'm pissed at the way he treats Frank. It takes me back to wanting to smack the shit out of him.

I mean, he could have stood up for Frank around his friends And the whole party thing really pissed me off. The whole, 'Can you baby-sit so I can go party? I'll make it worth it' just...gah!

But, again, as I read further, my attention moved from Gerard to Frank. I not only want to smack the shit out of him for allowing Gerard to treat him this way, I want to shake him until he gets it.

Sorry, I didn't mean to go so deep into it. It's just so aggravating. I was some one's secret once and it damn near drove me crazy.

I was told to stop reading this by a friend, but said kiss my ass, it's too good to stop. LOL!

I hope what I said isn't taken the wrong way. I love this soooo very much. Aggravation and all. XD
xoxoxoxo♥♥♥

[lalaljay]

No, oh golly I totally dig it, it's warming and whatnot to think my sub par writings could cause even the slightest depth analyzation.
I've been pretty dead set on not creating Gerard as the big bad antagonist, or Frank as the pitiful angel that is harmed by the outside environment.
Like, I think it'd be more reasonable and less obnoxious to read if it was just people that made choices on their own accord that affected their lives after a direct cause, ya know?