Re: Oh My Godneko_90December 14 2012, 02:00:12 UTC
Several hours have passed and I still can't get over my feelings for this chapter ;-;
Because, yes, you did say it was going to be about the trip, and I kinda expected things to happen, but not so many! *-*
Since I have to start from some point, let it be the beginning. This way I might even have some order xD
They give the other his favorite food! And they don't talk about it but spend all their time together *-* Although, I wonder... since they spend so much time together, I suppose that the bullies don't come off near Aiba because of Sho? :D
The plane moment was so-cute. I read that while in class (checked the F-list for a moment and you just published it and I could not not read it) and I almost melt right there. And I'm in the front row. Not only because of Sho caressing Aiba's face and smiling and Aiba smiling in his sleep like he knew it was Sho or he was dreaming about it, but Aiba falling asleep like a little kid, too excited to keep awake.
And of course, the room moment (they have a double bed! They actually sleep together *-*) (they might do other things in the future, but as for now, I can imagine Sho looking at the outline of Aiba's back and wanting to get a little closer but not doing it because stop it, it's creepy and you'll scare him out and *--*), with them goofing around in the bed, and Sho protecting Aiba from falling. Aiba didn't even get the chance to be thankful, or ask, if he didn't know what it was about. It's not like I can blame him :P
So glad the awkwardness didn't last. And so happy about what happened instead. Them, in the beach, and Sho confessing that maybe he was kinda like a stalker, and Aiba not believing it, because he's just as dazed with Sho as Sho is with him. Sho covering his feet with sand was a detail that I loved. Don't know if it's because I do it too or because it's just a lovely sign of how nervous he is or what, but I loved it.
100 points for Sho for being so brave and not being awkward or avoid Aiba after confessing that he had kind of observed him and another 100 points for Aiba for acting on it.
They kissed! And now they are boyfriends ♪~
And they hug and watch the stars together under a blanket and the world could crash and they wouldn't care, probably.
(Also, I noticed that you kinda change the POV, just for a little while, and then you go back to the original one. Maybe it was intentional? :O I don't know, but I wanted to point it out to you in case it was unintentional)
Can't wait to see what happens next *-*
I don't think I ever told you that I liked the themed icons a lot, did I? They are also kinda related with the chapters, so it's ever cooler!
Yay, you're on holidays already? *---* Enjoy them a lot, you deserve it! :D Rest a lot, and watch a lot of Arashi. They will take good care of you :DDD
Re: Oh My GodlainatsDecember 14 2012, 10:05:59 UTC
I don't know where to start~ good morning! :D (okay it's almost 11 am, but weeeell)
I was actually a bit worried if I maybe didn't tell enough about the school trip thing itself, but I really wanted to focus on sakuraiba.. so I am really glad to hear that "so many things happened" :D yaay!
honestly I never really thought about the POV. I just write down what's in my head.. so it was unintentional! (:
I really don't know what to say, I am overwhelmed :') I have absolutely no idea how to handle compliments or the story being praised.. so.. just.. thank you thank you thank youuuu (and another thank you ^//^)
I try to adjust the icons to the chapters.. I am happy that you noticed it :33 and also that you appreciate the small details in the fic (like the sand-thingy :D).. ahhhh I don't know what to say~ (me: overwhelmed; once again!)
Well holidays.. I have to work next week too, but I have a few days off until then! I am watching Arashi variety shows like 24/7 now.. The best thing ever. :D
Re: Oh My Godneko_90December 18 2012, 14:32:21 UTC
Oh, although I try to say what I like, I'll try not to overwhelm you, that's no good either :3 But really, you've got nothing to thank me, you're the one writing here! :D
Oh, I don't know why I thought they were holidays xD But spending days off watching Arashi 24/7 is a great idea *-*
I'll have holidays after this friday and until the beginning of January :D Still not on holidays, but almost there :D (My body already feels like that xDD)
Because, yes, you did say it was going to be about the trip, and I kinda expected things to happen, but not so many! *-*
Since I have to start from some point, let it be the beginning. This way I might even have some order xD
They give the other his favorite food! And they don't talk about it but spend all their time together *-* Although, I wonder... since they spend so much time together, I suppose that the bullies don't come off near Aiba because of Sho? :D
The plane moment was so-cute. I read that while in class (checked the F-list for a moment and you just published it and I could not not read it) and I almost melt right there. And I'm in the front row. Not only because of Sho caressing Aiba's face and smiling and Aiba smiling in his sleep like he knew it was Sho or he was dreaming about it, but Aiba falling asleep like a little kid, too excited to keep awake.
And of course, the room moment (they have a double bed! They actually sleep together *-*) (they might do other things in the future, but as for now, I can imagine Sho looking at the outline of Aiba's back and wanting to get a little closer but not doing it because stop it, it's creepy and you'll scare him out and *--*), with them goofing around in the bed, and Sho protecting Aiba from falling. Aiba didn't even get the chance to be thankful, or ask, if he didn't know what it was about. It's not like I can blame him :P
So glad the awkwardness didn't last. And so happy about what happened instead. Them, in the beach, and Sho confessing that maybe he was kinda like a stalker, and Aiba not believing it, because he's just as dazed with Sho as Sho is with him. Sho covering his feet with sand was a detail that I loved. Don't know if it's because I do it too or because it's just a lovely sign of how nervous he is or what, but I loved it.
100 points for Sho for being so brave and not being awkward or avoid Aiba after confessing that he had kind of observed him and another 100 points for Aiba for acting on it.
They kissed! And now they are boyfriends ♪~
And they hug and watch the stars together under a blanket and the world could crash and they wouldn't care, probably.
(Also, I noticed that you kinda change the POV, just for a little while, and then you go back to the original one. Maybe it was intentional? :O I don't know, but I wanted to point it out to you in case it was unintentional)
Can't wait to see what happens next *-*
I don't think I ever told you that I liked the themed icons a lot, did I? They are also kinda related with the chapters, so it's ever cooler!
Yay, you're on holidays already? *---* Enjoy them a lot, you deserve it! :D Rest a lot, and watch a lot of Arashi. They will take good care of you :DDD
I think you might see this tomorrow morning so...
Good morning! ☼
♥♥♥
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I was actually a bit worried if I maybe didn't tell enough about the school trip thing itself, but I really wanted to focus on sakuraiba.. so I am really glad to hear that "so many things happened" :D yaay!
honestly I never really thought about the POV. I just write down what's in my head.. so it was unintentional! (:
I really don't know what to say, I am overwhelmed :') I have absolutely no idea how to handle compliments or the story being praised.. so.. just.. thank you thank you thank youuuu (and another thank you ^//^)
I try to adjust the icons to the chapters.. I am happy that you noticed it :33 and also that you appreciate the small details in the fic (like the sand-thingy :D).. ahhhh I don't know what to say~ (me: overwhelmed; once again!)
Well holidays.. I have to work next week too, but I have a few days off until then! I am watching Arashi variety shows like 24/7 now.. The best thing ever. :D
How about you? (: do you have holidays soon?
♥♥♥~
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Oh, I don't know why I thought they were holidays xD But spending days off watching Arashi 24/7 is a great idea *-*
I'll have holidays after this friday and until the beginning of January :D Still not on holidays, but almost there :D (My body already feels like that xDD)
♥♥!
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