Gratification

Nov 18, 2009 15:16

Fandom: Star Trek TOS
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Rating: PG
Summary: At an interview a few months after the V'Ger incident, Kirk is asked if he and Spock are lovers.... Based on Roddenberry's famous footnote.
Notes: Written for this prompt on the TOS kink meme. Some ideas taken from Judy Gran's analysis here.
Words: ~1200

Gratification )

kirk/spock, fanfic, fandom: star trek tos

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kradie November 18 2009, 15:50:44 UTC
Ooooh, pretty-pretty! This was very well executed, especially picking up on the "my best gratification"-bit, as when I have bad moments that one tends to make me a bit sad. Good to hear that it's all tosh from Kirk himself. :P I'm so happy you filled it - thank you!

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lah_mrh November 18 2009, 15:55:26 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

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klashfor November 28 2009, 00:06:15 UTC
I love this! Especially the part where Jim says he learned lying with the truth from Spock. Very Vulcan.

Wonderful!

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lah_mrh November 28 2009, 15:53:25 UTC
Thank you!

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insanekht December 1 2009, 21:04:18 UTC
How lovely!

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lah_mrh December 1 2009, 23:58:08 UTC
Thank you!

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dreamlittleyo December 24 2009, 05:20:21 UTC
This is amazing! Seriously, I adore it! I love the way you've fit so much logical breakdown into his delivery of that answer without making it feel overwrought or cludgy. It's so natural and believable, and Spock's response! I love seeing him vulnerable like this, and you did such a brilliant job with it! Wonderful!

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lah_mrh December 24 2009, 12:07:23 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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rae1013 December 24 2009, 21:12:57 UTC
This is the perfect fill for that prompt. You handled Kirk's inner thoughts deftly during the interview and showed exactly why the phrasing and word choice was chosen. Also, Spock's vulnerability at the end and Kirk's assurance was just icing on the cake. Love it. <3

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lah_mrh December 26 2009, 12:15:52 UTC
Thank you!

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