Fic: No More Games

[lagolindari]

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[lagolindari]

Aw ♥. Thank you so very much!

[bookgodess15]

I am squeeful. Still. After reading this three times over. I love Morgan's voice, and the way you describe Reid makes me jealous, and--and--yes. Just yes. Fantastic job.

[lagolindari]

Aw, thank you so very much ♥!

It's really encouraging for me. I've been writing in English for a short time only and... I'm so glad you think I'm getting it right. ♥.

[bookgodess15]

I find it absolutely amazing that you write so well in a second language--frankly, you're better than most writers here who have English as their first language. Good for you! I can't wait to see more from you!

[bug_123]

So, so, so cute! I think I melted into a puddle at some point! Awesome.

[lagolindari]

aw, thank you so very much ♥!

[fourth_moon]

Reid just smiled back, his eyes darting quickly to Morgan’s before going back on the cards. He pretended to study them for a moment - missing the way Morgan’s gaze remained on his face, slowly mapping his features, the smudged bruise on his pale cheekbone, his never quiet lips. And Morgan - Morgan just sat, as he felt something that was heavy and soft and complicated come to settle in his chest - an unexpected, warm realization pulsing its way up to his head, his hands. He swallowed, his throat suddenly tight, and looked at the tousled boy in front of him, his mind a turmoil of secret words, unspoken wishes.

Love that paragraph.

[lagolindari]

Aw, thank you so very much ♥.
It means a lot to me - English is not my fist language, and to know I'm managig to use it right is so very encouraging!

[tarlwen]

*squee* thank you, this is exactly the amount of fluff and cuteness that I needed to read to save the day from being completely awful.

I especially lived the Reid-babble instead of a simple 'yes' or 'no'

[lagolindari]

Aw, I'm so glad it helped ♥!

Thank you so very much.