Comments | lafleurdumal85: Jump the Track: Chapter 1

lafleurdumal85

Jump the Track: Chapter 1

Feb 26, 2011 18:33

( Chapter 1 )

dean/castiel, au, title: jump the track, rating: nc-17

Comments 27

functionalduck February 26 2011, 20:07:22 UTC

This s really good. Looking forward to see what you'll do with the story in the future :)

lafleurdumal85 March 6 2011, 21:58:20 UTC

Thank you! It's my first attempt at an AU, and I've had to get one of my American friends to help me out with the details of US high schools. I'm just about to post C2 :)

shenova February 28 2011, 22:09:08 UTC

Nice start to the story poor Casteil new guy with a weird name I feel a little bullying coming his way. Lets hope Dean will be there to help.

lafleurdumal85 March 6 2011, 21:59:15 UTC

Thank you :) Cas is definitely awkward, but he's got some tricks up his sleeve! I'm just about to post C2.

mulder200 March 15 2011, 23:56:28 UTC

I feel so bad for Dean here. His self esteem level sucks!

lafleurdumal85 March 20 2011, 19:09:28 UTC

I know :(
I found it interesting to think about whether he would really be that different if he'd had a 'normal' life. Obviously a lot of things would be better, but I don't know if he'd like himself any more.

rebbie13 May 31 2011, 03:36:25 UTC

ooh i am intrigued! so happy there are more chapters for me to read. =)

lafleurdumal85 June 1 2011, 11:35:40 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it :)

WOW night_swan926 June 30 2011, 20:19:15 UTC

I've never tried reading AU before because it never caught my interest, but I can say that I might have to read others because this is really really good! I love it!

Re: WOW lafleurdumal85 July 3 2011, 18:24:26 UTC

Thank you so much!

I was the same - I never used to read AUs, but then I read a really good one and now I can't stop! I think it's because canon is so depressing lately. Anyway, I'm so glad you're enjoying this :D