You should really consider expanding these stories. Honestly, you have some great ideas and a voice that really draws the reader (me) in. You should seriously consider writing a full sci-fi novel.
ETA: Not to mention that you are funny in general. If you wrote a novel it would probably be great even if it's relatively short.
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Here are some others:
http://lafinjack.livejournal.com/210032.html
http://lafinjack.livejournal.com/211470.html - after my grandma died
http://lafinjack.livejournal.com/221096.html
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ETA: Not to mention that you are funny in general. If you wrote a novel it would probably be great even if it's relatively short.
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But looks aren't everything.
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