Fic: La Petite Mort pt.1

[ladyrhyanne]

Title: La Petite Mort pt.1/2
Pairing/Characters: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, guy-on-guy sex, swearing
Spoilers: Major plot spoiler for Season 6
Word Count: 13,122 (total)
Disclaimer: Don't own - just playing in somebody else's sandbox.
Summary: Nobody said that any hunt was easy but Sam wasn't expecting this kind of curse, hell he

Comments

[katsheswims]

Just a couple things (I will leave a real review at the end)

Where you talk about Sam recognizing a scar on Dean's wrist in the dream, you say he got hte scar in childhood, but after Dean got out of Hell all of his old scars were gone...

And here: "He had stood by and watched that damn vampire turn is brother because it was an ends to a means" The saying here is means to an end.

[ladyrhyanne]

Oh for crying out loud, *sigh* ends to a means, seriously what the hell was I thinking? Or maybe it was that I wasn't thinking. Oi!

You know, I knew that Dean had come back without scars, who doesn't and yet when the knowledge is needed...

There are days I should just back away from the computer for the safety of all.

Thanks for pointing those out to me so I could fix them.

[deadflowers5]

It was good! I go to read on.

[ladyrhyanne]

Thanks!

[fanofsuper]

Sorry about the delay in readin. LJ sent me a whole bunch of notifications very late & I have been catching up as quickly as I can

Poor Sam & Dean, they are both so confused about everything that has happened, the one thing they need (& won't do) is to have a long talk about things

Off to read Part 2 now

[yvonnegos]

Oh, this soooooo needs a sequel! With the boys hunting and going on as usual, except with Dean feeding from Sam here and there, and having to take care of him when he's weak and exhausted afterwards. ;D So much potential!