Lead the Way - Chapter 037 - Control

Apr 04, 2011 11:27

There is a disease I call YouTube disease. You know, a friend sends you a link to a song, you really just want to spend these three minutes watching it, but 2 hours later you end up with Obama's inauguration speech in rap or whatever. It works just as well for google. Or Facebook.

This morning I got an email, saying I had a message. So I went to ( Read more... )

emily/jj, lead the way

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triller69 April 4 2011, 19:50:51 UTC
Smut!!! It was sensual, loving and beautiful though! Very sweet! The way JJ affects Emily is just so adroable, puts a goofy smile on my face.
Sorry I haven't gotten to read and comment 'till now but LJ has been a bitch today.

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ladyrashida April 5 2011, 07:20:55 UTC
I noticed LJ was up and down all day :( But I'm happy you still got your fix!

I love the idea of Emily being so helpless to what JJ asks of her. She just can't say no.

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talos13 April 4 2011, 22:19:30 UTC
Woohoo. Yay for aggressive JJ! (Feel free to send her to my house any time ;-)) I'm really pleased to see some more progress and that Emily has let JJ in (I've just sat for about 10 minutes trying to find a way of saying that without it potentially sounding dirty, but it's too late and hey, a little double entendre never hurt anyone.) It's such a pity that Emily is already imagining the end of their relationship, while it's only beginning, but I suppose she's never known any different and imagining it all now is preparing herself as much as she can for the hurt she believes will come.
Your story continues to enthrall and entertain and, as ever, I can't wait for more!

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ladyrashida April 5 2011, 07:23:34 UTC
I'll send you JJ and I get to play chess with Emily :)

I laughed so hard when I read what you said about letting her in and trying to make it sound not-dirty. When I wrote this and sent it to Syccas she had a pretty nice comment about that about writing a sex scene to show that Emily was letting her in :D

Thank you so much for commenting on every chapter!

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erynhawk April 4 2011, 23:29:14 UTC
logged on tonight solely to see if you'd posted and you didn't disappoint. excellent chapter.
and that's true about youtube. i aim for one video then get completely distracted by something completely unrelated. stay on for hours when it should have been minutes, woops.
looking forward to the next update!

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ladyrashida April 5 2011, 07:25:22 UTC
The thing I love most about YT is the super unexpected path you take. I should write this down at some point. It's hilarious :D

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luvthejem April 5 2011, 04:33:59 UTC
*sigh* Once again, JJ drops the ball. Nothing says you're a convenience like not even bothering to get a sitter so you can stay the night. I'm sure Morgan would have done it, but apparently, forethought is not JJ's strong suit. *headdesk*

Very well written. YAY! Nothing makes me crazier than poor grammar, so I'm always thankful to find a writer that knows how to put together a proper sentence. Can't wait to read the rest of this.

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ladyrashida April 5 2011, 07:32:45 UTC
Ah, well I'm afraid that it is my fault. JJ would have a regular sitter (Leslie, her neighbour's daughter), but maybe she was embarrassed to ask for the whole night? I didn't think of the message she was sending not staying the night. So please don't hold it against JJ, Emily won't.

Thank you for the compliment, but I have to confess that it's not all my doing. I have a beta for content, Syccas and one native speaker to help with grammar and spelling and things. Well I guess, now I even have two native speaking betas :) Because those things are important to me as a reader. And given that English is not my first language I need all the help I can get :)

Love the icon, btw!

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luvthejem April 5 2011, 20:03:05 UTC
*G* I suppose it might not be something most people think about until you've had heavy things lobbed at your head for not thinking about how that made her feel. *shrugs* As long as it wasn't an intentional slight, then cool. I will do the dance of JJ Finally Made Progress!

Well considering that a lot of people think "2", is a proper spelling of any version of the word "to", I think you're doing pretty well. LOL!

*G* Grumpybear made it.

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ladyrashida April 7 2011, 00:59:40 UTC
No, it was completely unintentional. JJ is still new to this whole mother thing so it might not even be that big of a deal. Come to think of it, it does fit with Prentiss' theory...

I laughed so hard when (in 30 Rock) Cerie sent Liz a text saying: Ur v8k8sh1 iz baqon. I mean... how is this saving time? And what made her think it was okay to send this to her BOSS? :D

Sorry it took so long to reply, LJ was being a bitch all day! Hopefully I'll be able to post tomorrow.

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Yes pjinabnit April 5 2011, 06:03:16 UTC
Okay so this time I could do the happy dance in my own room. It is my one night between hotel rooms. I was so excited to read this. This was nice and very well written. Why do I fear something lurking around the corner? I know you said this was going to be long and to trust you so I am but I feel angst coming on.

Oh the YouTube thing is like a disease or something. I hate it! People at my work (who should find actual work to do) sit and email YouTube videos back an forth to each other all day. It is like the old potato chip saying "no one can eat just one" you can't just watch one video.

This fic has made me fall in love with CM again. I won't watch season 1 and I am done with Season 6, but 2-5 I am watching again and again. I really watch because I think Padget Brewster is hot and I want to see her again on some screen

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Re: Yes ladyrashida April 5 2011, 07:39:54 UTC
I did tell you to trust me, but I never said there wouldn't be any more angst. In the end though the trip will have been well worth it.

The things I've seen on YT: extreme ironing, the birth of a baby (I'd kill to get that image out of my head), crazy stunts, super creepy stalkerish fanvids...

S1 was kind of boring. Especially the first couple of eps are so wrong! How Morgan keeps talking about the Unsub as "I"... S2-5 are some of the best TV ever made! I'm glad I helped you reconnect with that.

And everytime I see your icon I just want to lean in and tickle her between the ears :) so cute!

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