Comments | ladyrashida: Lead the Way - Chapter 032 - 4x08

ladyrashida

Lead the Way - Chapter 032 - 4x08 - Masterpiece

Mar 17, 2011 13:54

This chapter was really hard to write and had to be redone several times. By now I'm sure some of you have noticed that in the episode chapters I only transcribe scenes that either Emily or JJ are in and simply summarize the rest. In this episode we had no JJ and very little Emily and I had a hard time recounting the plot so that it was clear ( Read more... )

emily/jj, lead the way

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triller69 March 17 2011, 15:38:11 UTC

I can understand why this chapter was so hard to write! The interaction between Todd and Emily is intresting.

ladyrashida March 17 2011, 20:29:35 UTC

I can't help but pick up on some subtext there.

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ladyrashida March 17 2011, 20:31:37 UTC

Prentiss prouncing into that room was hawt!

As for Will: Some couples lose their identities when they procreate. Perfect example for that is Bette and Tina from the L Word when they start calling each other Momma B and Momma T. It's not that extreme here, but it was what I was going for.

Thank you *hug* Monday's chapter will finally bring an ounce of clarity.

talos13 March 17 2011, 17:46:30 UTC

Yes, I had wondered how you would tackle this episode, so I can understand the rewriting, but you've done it well. It's a good episode, but for the lack of Emily and JJ, though the Emily/Jordan interaction is certainly noteworthy!
It's good to know JJ is not being swayed by Will, though I imagine it's not going to be easy for her to get rid of him. Still, that's small considering the task that lies ahead of her to get through to Emily!

ladyrashida March 17 2011, 20:33:38 UTC

I think I saw Masterpiece more times than any other episode. Well perhaps Normal was worse. Yes, it def was worse.

I think JJ will never fully get rid of Will. Besides, I can't fully break up their (platonic) relationship since he's back in S5. She'll make some way in that department come Monday :)

pascaleledumbo March 18 2011, 19:37:36 UTC

As a JJ void episode, you've def make the best out of it. I need to rewatch all of the season 4 eh. I completely forgot there one moment that JJ was having her baby *facepalm*. Or perhaps because I read this at 4am.

As usual, great writing! Looking forward to Monday! Woohoo!

ladyrashida March 20 2011, 11:40:47 UTC

Paget has chemistry with everyone. She needs to call me :D

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ladyrashida March 20 2011, 11:42:00 UTC

52 Pickups was awesome! Emily dressing up would have been enough to carry the whole ep :D Jealousy can be very sexy. We'll see ;)