To be honest, I'm surprised there's not more mention of Lorannon's hunger, or anyone else, for that matter. *shrugs* -- Lorannon complains about it once and Thelyd whinges twice in this one section ... perhaps it's not atmospheric? Should I insert some more grumbling stomachs?
The 'light' repetition is a little distracting. -- Bloody homonyms :P Ta, hon, I rarely notice those.
Yeah, that's pretty severely bored, if you ask me. ;) -- Deus ex machinaically so, even ;) *snortles* Point taken, I'll try to come up with another reason ...
Ahhhhh...I wonder anew about lifespan and development and spans of fertility... -- Say the word and I'll spam you half to death, my sweet, though you're the last I expected to make a Dark Elven inquiry! XD
I guess I'd still find that perturbing--as one of his cohorts, with him being found and then alone with the Masters for so long. *shrugs* And, er--they cleaned the chapel all night long and didn't find that a little odd? Help me!*bounds to the rescue
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That's the problem, I wonder, but not nearly enough to want the answer. Rather like the way in which I wonder how long it was since I last dusted the bookcases. ;P
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-- Lorannon complains about it once and Thelyd whinges twice in this one section ... perhaps it's not atmospheric? Should I insert some more grumbling stomachs?
The 'light' repetition is a little distracting.
-- Bloody homonyms :P Ta, hon, I rarely notice those.
Yeah, that's pretty severely bored, if you ask me. ;)
-- Deus ex machinaically so, even ;) *snortles* Point taken, I'll try to come up with another reason ...
Ahhhhh...I wonder anew about lifespan and development and spans of fertility...
-- Say the word and I'll spam you half to death, my sweet, though you're the last I expected to make a Dark Elven inquiry! XD
I guess I'd still find that perturbing--as one of his cohorts, with him being found and then alone with the Masters for so long. *shrugs* And, er--they cleaned the chapel all night long and didn't find that a little odd? Help me!*bounds to the rescue ( ... )
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