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"Crossroads of the Force" [PG-13] - Chapter Twenty

Jan 07, 2008 08:57

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crossroads of the force chapters anonymous January 8 2008, 04:16:31 UTC

I am enjoying your story so much, and I have given up trying to guess if Anakin will ever find out about Padme in this story, let alone be reunited with her before the end! There have been so many near misses, and people who know things about Padme that do not tell Anakin about them, and now Voranda is dead without contacting him, or Padme possibly knowing she was killed. You know how to keep your readers in suspense! I look forward to reading how this ends, and to reading the last 2 stories in the series you were planning to write. Thank you for sharing your talent! Shelley

Re: crossroads of the force chapters ladylavinia January 8 2008, 04:35:59 UTC

Actually, I plan to write 2 more stories until I go into my alternate versions of the Original Trilogy.

emavalexis January 8 2008, 06:02:03 UTC

Yeah, I have to agree with the previous poster -- this story is really enjoyable. Very original, well-written, and imaginative. And that last exchange between Padme and Obi-Wan was really nicely done and honestly quite sad, given all the regret and distance that's built up between them.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter.