Everything That Mattered - Chapter 11

[ladylapislazuli]

Title: Everything That Mattered (11/21)
Pairing: Caspian/Edmund
Rating: PG-13

Summary: There was always something there, some feeling that Edmund had always acknowledged. As the feeling escalates, he and Caspian find themselves swept into something that neither of them had ever dared to dream of before.
A/N: I've finally turned fifteen! ... Last

Comments

[kyniecwagirl]

Ack no!! Cliffhanger! : P

This was a very well written chapter: you definitely portrayed the tension between the two, and I'm glad Edmund didn't back down from this confrontation.

"When Caspian was sulky, his behaviour became that of a stubborn child, and affection from Edmund could usually get him smiling again." Loved this line. : )

[ladylapislazuli]

I'm dreading updating, though. I don't like the next chapter, and it's too late to change it, because then everything else changes. :P

Thank you! I'm glad I was able to get it across.

:D Caspian loves his Edmund! And tends to throw tantrums... :P

[kyniecwagirl]

Uh-oh, dreading the next chapter... I'm still looking forward to it, though. : )

[ladylapislazuli]

Thanks. :D The part that I'm dreading may not be obvious from this chapter... Thinking about it, I don't think it has anything to do with this chapter at all. :P

[kyniecwagirl]

hmmm... I'll have to see if I can pick it out. ; )