Comments | ladyjanelly: fic: "Fever" Criminal Minds (one-sided R/M?)

ladyjanelly

fic: "Fever" Criminal Minds (one-sided R/M?)

Feb 17, 2009 10:08

Title: Fever
Author: LadyJanelly
Rating: FRT
Pairing: Reid/Morgan one-sided thoughts
Summary: Reid is ill. Morgan questions himself.
Notes: This started out as a cute little h/c domestic first-time thing and then Morgan started thinking thinky thoughts on me and the tone sort of changed. Any feedback would be appreciated.

( Fever )

criminal minds

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ladyjanelly February 18 2009, 01:22:10 UTC

Heh. And then ten more for Morgan to accept that Reid's capable of loving him and he's not a pervert for accepting that love. They can be such a deliciously messed up couple.

I reserve the right to further explore these themes in a longer fic and plagarize myself the best lines. :)

saphicwicca February 18 2009, 05:47:16 UTC

I second that...does that help?

Though you're right, they are such delightfully screwed-up people, which makes them so entertaining and challenging to write for.

roxymissrose February 17 2009, 20:28:43 UTC

Oh my gosh this was wonderful! I *love* your Morgan, he's such a real person, a *decent* person. I love that he knows himself so well.

*HUGS* Thank you!

ladyjanelly February 18 2009, 01:46:09 UTC

I really like writing Morgan's POV. I understand the issues he could have-that lack of trust in his own motives and desires. He questions himself but doesnt always come up with the correct answers...

tearful_eye February 17 2009, 22:11:28 UTC

oh, this is beautiful. it hurts, but it feels so right - i really like this.

ladyjanelly February 18 2009, 01:49:05 UTC

I'd planned just a little bit of angst about Reid and his mom but then Morgan go tall thinky on me. :) So hard for him to trust himself.

nebula99 February 17 2009, 22:54:12 UTC

This is nice - I liked Morgan's restraint and self-knowledge, even though it was hurting him.

ladyjanelly February 18 2009, 01:54:41 UTC

Thanks. :) I'm really enjoying writing Morgan's POV.

wow... katla_frej February 17 2009, 23:38:24 UTC

okay to tart of i looove Spencer/Morgan, totally my OTP...

..but i always have a bit of trouble beliving in the story, unless it has a fair bit of angst mixed in, because Morgan is a sexual abuse survivor and he's probably spent much of his life convincing himself he's not like buford

and dude he calls Spencer *kid* there is no way in hell they would ever hook up without some serious soul searching and a lot of quostioning himself on dereks side

.. hmhm excuse me my rant great story you nailed it :)

Re: wow... ladyjanelly February 18 2009, 02:21:38 UTC

I love Morgan's possible conflicts, and I agree that falling into a gay relationship would be hard enough for him, not to mention being with someone with such obvious vulnerabilities.

So tricky for him to find that place between victim and monster and just be a lover and partner.

Glad you enjoyed it. :)