Fic--Boston
Fanfic--everyone who isnt here for the LotR stuff should like it. Let me know what you think. I don't know if it's ready to be posted to a public comm, and I can use some concrit.
Thanks to amourality for her help and support and to realm_of_ylith for getting me interested in this new subject of fanfiction. Yeah, I needed another fandom like I needed a hole in the ( Read more... )
Aside from that, I thought this made a fairly decent begining. I was thrown of at first because I was all like, "Who the fuck is Jimmy, and why does this sound so much like 8Mile?" But really, after that it was smooth sailin'. Nice action bits and good flow. I do like Jimmy's voice though. I like guys who swear. A lot. Guys who swear a lot.
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Yes. It is tasty and good. I have been a fan for all of a week. There isnt much to read, especially since I'm not a fan of the boy-band stuff. There's an emslash archive and fic group on lj. Amourality is fixated. So happy to share the crack. Write something and she'll marry you. :)
I've only just found *NSYNC slash.
I saw it. I oh-so-carefully avoided their "music" and just as carefully avoided the fics (though I got a few with my EmSlash because I didnt know their names. sneaky fuckers). Somehow I imagine it sorta tasting like seran-wrap. If that makes sense.
Why Jimmy? Why not just um, Marshal? *sigh* I have this block against rps that I just havent been able to get over yet. I am reading rps but still not writing it. This is the closest i've gotten. "he gave me permission to write rps by adding elements of fiction to his biographical movie. Yeah, that's the ticket ( ... )
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Really? Fic with flavor, eh?
I have this block against rps that I just havent been able to get over yet.
*omg* Me too. It sort of feels like rape somehow...
Do you think referring to him as Rabbit part of the time would help with the mental transition?
I don't know if it would help you, but try it out.
Was him trying to piss that guy off so much he'd fight him instead of chasing Lily convincing? Dialog-wise?
Yes, I liked that part. The story didn't really pick up until then.
When did you get it? Was it too obvious, or not obvious enough?
The fourth sentence. He was talking about battles and trailer parks, the connection just had to be made there. Obvious enough.
Realistic, in character and in voice? Did his actions make sense in the context of his life?
Well, I'm not a big Em fan, but from what little I know he's pretty real. And it's what I'd do.
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Especially since I wanted him to be traveling with a kid in this one. It feels invasive to use an adult's real name and history and stuff. I'd feel twice as bad to use a little girl's. And really, why write Marshall when I've got Jimmy to use?
I hear Em's voice from one of the videos going "You don't know me."
Anyways,
How was the entrance of the BDS boys? I figure only people who know the fandom will recognize them, but when did you? (yeah, finding it in my journal was a clue,I know)
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Oh yes. You could just smell the fear, the need to protect her.
This is just...yeah. Never thought of slashing Eminem with anyone, least of all one of the twins - but this is really good. And I have to admit I already knew it was Eminem because I saw the manipped pic first, but yeah - this is good. Really really good.
Mind if I friend you? For more ficlety goodness. *grin*
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I had no idea he had a fandom.
Oh yes! He does. It small but loving :D. Just about every fic in existence can be found here.
I've only just found *NSYNC slash.
Lol. Then I just have to rec this guy. Possible the best boyband slash in the universe.
K, I'm done pimping ;D.
Much love, Ami x.
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