Vignettes and Thoughts upon a Life Unplanned but Well Loved or This is Good - Part 1: Things Not See

[ladygray99]

Title: Vignettes and Thoughts upon a Life Unplanned but Well Loved or This is Good - Part 1: Things Not Seen
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[neur0vanity]

Great start! You've got a wonderful voice for Charlie.

[ladygray99]

Thanks! I'm going to try to post up one a day. They'll start getting longer. Sex in about a week ;-)

[fredbassett]

Lovely last line. Fun fic. I shall look at broccoli in a different light now :)

[ladygray99]

It's tempting to do a whole thing on just Charlie contemplating food.

[deinonychus_1]

Heh, nice. Good Charlie voice. He really does seem to spend far too much time with that expression that says his mind is somewhere entirely different, doesn't he?

(yep, I started at part 7, and have now gone back through the archive to start at the sensible 'beginning' end of things).

[ladygray99]

No worries. You haven't missed anything big yet. Actually you're starting at a good point. Things are about to pick up. ;-)

[jelsemium]

Nice, it seems very in character for Charlie to go off on that sort of tangent in the middle of dinner.

[ladygray99]

Thanks :-)

[mockingbird1997]

Charlie stared at the broccoli between his chopsticks. Agent Colby Granger stared at Charlie staring at the broccoli between his chopsticks. Agent David Sinclair stared at them both.
Now I ask are they getting paid for that and isn't Charlie always seeing something no one else is

[ladygray99]

I'm sure it's over their official lunch break.