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Who We Are (25/35)

Jan 14, 2011 06:42

Title: Who We Are (25/35)
Author: ladygray99
Rating: PG13
Characters/Pairings: Charlie/David
Word count: 4,254
Warnings/Spoilers: Attempted Suicide and the after effects there of. See Part 1 for Spoilers.
Summary: Sometimes life makes you look in the mirror and if you don’t like what you see there are only a couple of options. - No matter what's happening on the ( Read more... )

fandom: numb3rs, pairing: charlie/david, rating: pg13

Comments 16

fredbassett January 13 2011, 17:52:53 UTC

Fantastic chapter! David certainly got The Talk, all right, just not quite the one he was expecting. I loved Alan's insights into how Charlie thinks and what being a genius actually means in his case. Really great stuff :)

ladygray99 January 13 2011, 18:16:05 UTC

:-) Thank you. This was another part I found tricky because I know what's inside of Charlie's head but it was hard finding another character who could say it out loud.

t_vo0810 January 13 2011, 18:25:49 UTC

OH! I loved this chapter hardcore. Of course, anytime I get all three of the Eppes men in one place, I am a happy girl but 3 Eppes Men and a David is even better ( ... )

ladygray99 January 14 2011, 03:51:34 UTC

David's dreams are going to come to a bit of a climax before the end and I had to write motherhen!charlie. You can no convince me he doesn't have it in him. And I wanted to show that there is a bit of balance in the relationship.

msgrahamcracker January 13 2011, 20:02:48 UTC

There have been a lot of things written about Charlie's early life - as a toddler who did his older brother's homework, as a misfit in high school and an enigma in college - but, Alan's description of newborn Charlie's overactive brain just trying to process the world around him took my breath away. Outstanding. Loved Alan and David together - almost like family, huh?

Great chapter. See you again tomorrow.

ladygray99 January 14 2011, 03:52:38 UTC

Well I always wondered if Charlie was borne with his brain the way it is or if one day a couple of neurons locked into place and it just sort of happened.

jeja05 January 13 2011, 20:05:02 UTC

It's charlie's turn to take care of david and i love it!
Alan finally shows us that he really knows his son, and it was time for david to have a serious talk about charlie's feeling.
So with all this i think it is an other great chapter, that makes all the protagonists progress for the best!

ladygray99 January 14 2011, 03:53:43 UTC

I think Alan knows Charlie better than he thinks he does and I doesn't matter that he's not with a girl any more Alan still wants grandchildren.

mj_els January 13 2011, 20:43:38 UTC

love it great chapter

love the talk with alan

can´t wait for next chapter

ladygray99 January 14 2011, 03:53:57 UTC

:-) Thank you. A lot of work went into this bit.