Who We Are (21/35)

Jan 10, 2011 04:27

Title: Who We Are (21/35)
Author: ladygray99
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Charlie/David
Word count: 2,303
Warnings/Spoilers: Attempted Suicide and the after effects there of. See Part 1 for Spoilers.
Summary: Sometimes life makes you look in the mirror and if you don’t like what you see there are only a couple of options. - David tells some secrets.
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fandom: numb3rs, rating: pg, pairing: charlie/david

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riverotter1951 January 9 2011, 15:45:53 UTC
Perfect: David took his eyes of the road for a split second to look at Colby. “Charlie’s worth the risk.”

“Sure?”

“Yeah, I’m sure.”

“Okay then, good luck to both of you.”

Love the bit about not setting Matt up with Amita.

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ladygray99 January 9 2011, 15:47:44 UTC
Matt and Amita were actually an original idea for the story but Matt made it vary clear that he was not interested.

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t_vo0810 January 9 2011, 17:08:56 UTC
supportive!don for the win! \0/ weeeeeeeeee! he did such a good job with david and the team. hopefully, he can look out for david behind the scenes as well with the brass ( ... )

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ladygray99 January 10 2011, 04:53:13 UTC
I couldn't have Don be an ass forever. I also could have written 20 thousand more words of just Don talking to Bradford then Charlie. The whole situation knocked him for one hell of a loop.

Charlie's also really trying to be a good boyfriend. If nothing else he's trying to learn from past relationship mistakes in general.

Oh and Charlie flirting with Matt, not a good idea. It'll come up again later just trust me on this.

And I also love drunk David. You can just tell he'd giggle.

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fredbassett January 9 2011, 21:31:35 UTC
LOL, well done, Matt!

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ladygray99 January 10 2011, 04:53:28 UTC
Best gaydar in town.

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mj_els January 9 2011, 21:39:40 UTC
love it great chapter

love that colby is looking out for david

and very funny with the part that matt want charlie for him self

can´t wait for next chapter

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ladygray99 January 10 2011, 04:54:05 UTC
Colby's always looking out for David. That's what best friends do. :)

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joslin_13 January 10 2011, 04:41:17 UTC
This was great, as was the last chapter. I love the supporting characters (Bradford, especially the gossip comment, Colby as best friend, jealous!Matt), and Charlie was great in this chapter too. Finally he gets to be the supportive one.

I like how we keep getting more of David's relationship with Isaiah- the details about his death in this chapter were heartbreaking. Is David going to get any closure about that, or is he just going to have to move on?

Looking forward to more!

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ladygray99 January 10 2011, 04:55:09 UTC
Isaiah's and David's relationship will come to the foreground before the end of this. Glad you're looking forward to this.

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