Who We Are (4/35)

[ladygray99]

Title: Who We Are (4/35)
Author: ladygray99
Rating: PG13
Characters/Pairings: Charlie/David
Word count: 4,417
Warnings/Spoilers: Attempted Suicide and the after effects there of. See Part 1 for Spoilers.
Summary: Sometimes life makes you look in the mirror and if you don’t like what you see there are only a couple of options. - David and Charlie talk and Colby

Comments

[writergurl91]

Oh, and now there's woobie-Alan!

If it seems like I'm stalking your fics it's only because I'm on break and an obsessive fic checker. And you're an awesome writer. And this story is woobie-awesome. And I want to see David make Charlie better and have lots of smooches and um, other stuff.

I also totally love the distress word thing. David is totally awesome and I half wanted him to run off like Larry did with Don (yes I know that's another one of your universes but that's what came to mind)

Also, are you British? I only asked because you said "ruddy great" and I don't usually see that phrase, but some British phrases are fun to use anyway but I wondered.

More please!

[ladygray99]

I don't mind fic stockers. :-) And yes Alan gets his woobie moment. Pretty much everyone does.

David wishes he could just whisk Charlie away too but it's not going to work like that.

I'm not Bristish. Expat American living in New Zealand. I gave Dr. Patel 'ruddy great' because the Indian guys at work have speech patterns that lean slightly British. And more is up.

[writergurl91]

Yay for the Kiwis!

I've already begged for more on the next part. :)

Thank you for being so quick about them. I know I'm being greedy but they're just so good!

[t_vo0810]

I adored David's internal monologue so much while he was talking to Alan! Who wouldn't want a warm mathematician in your bed? seriously!

and when he gave Charlie 'their distress word' (best canon Colby/David moment ever), i melted into a puddle of goo. How i love our boys! Colby telling Charlie he was a missing part of the team made me so proud of him. :D I very much appreciated that Colby didn't act any differently around Charlie. He's a good man.

And David grabbing Charlie's chin and pinning him with his gaze? HELLO UST! guh. i have such a kink for the UST. I enjoy it as much as i enjoy the porn. almost. ;)

In short (too late! the rambler has struck again!), I very much liked this chapter. made of awesome and struck the balance between angst and coping perfectly! brava. the scene in the lobby of the inpatient facility was so pitch perfect, it made me wanna read it again just to see how you did it.
<3 T

[ladygray99]

I'm glad you like UST 'cause there's plenty coming up. And never be afraid to ramble. Rambling makes me happy. :-)

[joslin_13]

Just read the first four chapters, and it looks like this is going to be just as good as your other series. I love it. You do write broken characters very well. I'm liking the David's point of view thing, too. And Colby is awesome as well; it's nice that he's able to tease David in the midst of all these negative emotions from everyone else- that 'sitting in a tree' line was rather hilarious.

More, please!

[ladygray99]

:-) Thank you. I was rather unsure how people were going to like this fic so I'm glad you think it's as good as the rest.

[devo79]

Woobie-Alan for the win!

Um...that makes me sound like an asshole. Sorry :(

[ladygray99]

:-) No. I get what you mean.

[msgrahamcracker]

This is an amazing, wonderfully dark and touching story and I can't get enough of it. I find myself checking for updates several times a day. I'm not a big slash fan, but this story has great charactizations, a heartbreaking storyline, and (gulp) some good old-fashion romance. Waiting for the next update.

[ladygray99]

Peart 5 is up just not linked. Thank you for taking a chance on this.