FIC: You Have Your Father’s Eyes

Aug 28, 2008 20:18

Title: You Have Your Father’s Eyes ( Read more... )

mpreg, zod

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myownghost August 29 2008, 12:41:20 UTC
somehow i haven't read any of this story. *scratches head, perplexed* i'll dive into it later on!

i'll be looking forward to YMMS. :)

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ladydreamer August 30 2008, 18:25:58 UTC
It was my first WiP in this fandom. I'm not surprised that some people have missed it.

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jakrar August 30 2008, 05:54:35 UTC
Another great chapter! I adore heroic Lex and this Bruce Wayne and any Clark who loves Lex, and I adore their desperate rebellion against Kryptonian might. Also, the scene of Nevaeh's death was poignant and awesome; grabbing Peru-Col so the new alien would eat them both was brilliant. *shivers*

“I didn’t cause their deaths!” Lex argued. “I’ll have you know there was an explosion in the lab. It was sabotage.” He looked up at the ceiling and swallowed.

“My family died in a car crash,” Victor said slowly and uncertainly. “That’s what the papers said.”

“Car crashes are an easy cover-up in this city. I’ll show you the tape sometime, if they haven’t been destroyed in this mess. I’m telling you that someone has been blowing up my buildings for the past couple of months,” Lex insisted.

“Who?” Bruce asked in his calm, even voice. He rose and began walking over to them.

Lex looked to him for a moment, licking his lips. “Don’t know. They don’t exactly leave a calling card, although there have been some arrows left behind.”Oh, wow -- ( ... )

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ladydreamer August 30 2008, 18:19:27 UTC
Hee! Thanks for reading!

It was hard to go through with Nevaeh's plot, because she's sweet, and she was an OC I liked, but as you wind towards the end of a story, you just have to follow your plans. *hopes I'm strong enough*

Lex is awesome, the end.

I've had that wacky idea because since I found out what the Queen's Men were doing, since I know Cyborg's original backstory. I'll probably explore the concept later in another fic, if I can't get to it here, because really. They always use 'car crashes' to cover up things.

Thank you for you comments :D

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jakrar August 30 2008, 20:25:40 UTC
I will very much miss Nevaeh, but -- if she had to die -- I love her figuring out not only how to save her companions, but also how to take one of her enemies down with her. *pets her*

I don't know Cyborg's original backstory, but I love the idea of him gunning for Oliver Queen.... *eg*

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ladydreamer August 30 2008, 18:22:56 UTC
Thank you very much for reading and commenting! I hope the action lives up to expectation, and I'm glad my characterization is ringing true. ♥

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herohunter August 31 2008, 17:50:15 UTC
Gosh, I still love this one so much!!!

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ladydreamer August 31 2008, 22:38:28 UTC
Thank you, babe! If it weren't for you, this one would never have made it beyond the first couple of chapters!

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herohunter August 31 2008, 22:40:03 UTC
Awww! *snifflechoke*

I do remember being the only fan for a few chapters, but boy did I shake those pompoms!

:D

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