FIC: You Make Me Sick, Part Ten

Apr 02, 2008 23:42

Title: You Make Me Sick ( Read more... )

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roxymissrose April 3 2008, 06:01:17 UTC
Ah, we have a psychic connection---whenever I start screaming where the hell is my story--Ta-Da! There it is! Thank you!

Well, this part made me cry my stupid eyes out. Clark suddenly sobbing at the funeral--boy, that was such a geniuine moment. I've felt that myself, when your fear of a loved one going away from you just overwhelms you. It was beautifully written--all of it of course, but man--that funeral knocked me out.

The guys are wonderful, and so is Jonathan. I really really like what you've done with him. And things are looking up, hopefully? They're finally catching a break?

I worry about Lucas, and I worry about too much happiness. My Catholic heritage, no doubt. :)

And I still desperately want to kill Martha.

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ladydreamer April 4 2008, 04:55:57 UTC
Catholic heritiage... or perhaps learned experience with this fic.

The funerally really made me o.O too. Thanks, babe. I'm so glad you're liking (even if it is painful).

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herohunter April 3 2008, 06:14:50 UTC
This was a very good chapter! And Lucas needs to be okay!

*nodnod*

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ladydreamer April 4 2008, 05:07:00 UTC
Aww. Poor little Lucas. :(

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rednihilist April 3 2008, 06:39:44 UTC
Damn that Martha! *shakes fist* She is just a bad person, no doubt about it. I loved Jonathan's comment about her grasping for straws, where Lex and Clark and their relationship is concerned. And I fall more and more in love with your Jonathan every chapter. That man is awesome!

So, things might, maybe, perhaps, hopefully, please-God-let-them!!, be looking up for our boys and gals? Lex getting that job at the university and Clark doing well on the GED, and love is in the air for Mercy and Daize? *eyes you suspiciously* But then poor Lucas is missing, and why do I get the feeling that you're gonna make 'em all suffer again? XD

Great post, and I thank you for keeping up the 'GOOD' work!! *G*

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ladydreamer April 4 2008, 05:23:17 UTC
Lots of love and lots of hope for our boys.

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter :D

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myownghost April 3 2008, 10:48:05 UTC
oh, good, another chapter! i don't have time to read it right now but will right after work.

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myownghost April 3 2008, 21:05:31 UTC
i agree with all the others about how wonderful your Jonathan is, and how great it is that there's so much positive development here. i do want to know what's become of lucas, though. *hangs in for more*

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ladydreamer April 4 2008, 05:41:10 UTC
Well, one of the Kents has to be awesome. :P

Thank you. :D

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danceswithgary April 3 2008, 11:48:05 UTC
There was squeeing in the house when I saw you'd updated!

This was wonderful, the downs with Helen's funeral and the constant spectre of death hanging over Lex. The ups of Clark's devotion and the possibility of a little more financial stability.

I love this story!

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ladydreamer April 4 2008, 05:39:47 UTC
Thank you very much!! Oh, our boys. <3

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