Fic: Mr. Mxy’s Marvelous Day Out 2/2

[ladydreamer]

Title: Mr. Mxy’s Marvelous Day Out 2/2

Comments

[hils]

You know, I don't normally read mpreg but you write it so well I make an exception with your stuff.

I loved this. It was wacky and sweet and sad and perfect

Great work!

[ladydreamer]

Hee hee. Thank you. I'll take exceptions. :D

[geeky_ginger]

Awwwwwwww, now Clark and Lex and raise this little one and figure out how to have other ones! ;-)

[ladydreamer]

Hee hee! Of course! :D

[geeky_ginger]

And that's the way it oughta be! :-)

[jakrar]

Mad Mxy on the loose! *snicker* Great idea to merge SV's version of Mxy with the original comics' version, and I love the scenes of Lex trying to negotiate with him (especially saving Clark from becoming a snot monster by getting him turned into a 'hot chick' instead). Clark's powers of negotiation, however, leave something to be desired; I knew when he worded the deal with Mxy that Lex's pregnancy had been left out of what was going to be 'fixed.' *pets poor, pregnant Lex, and smacks doofus Clark* But at least it got Lana out of Lex's life, which can only be a good thing, and maybe Clark will decide that Lex's baby needs two responsible parents.... *g* Love Lex outing Oliver to Lois, as well as explaining that Oliver was behind Lex's kidnapping and torture. (Not to mention declaring that Oliver 'stuffs,' as I'm sure the egotistical bastard does. *eg*) And Mxy 'disappearing' Lois' mouth was inspired, as was the identity of the two enormous monsters terrorizing the city. *chokes laughing* Very, very cute story!

[ladydreamer]

Thank you. Yeah, Clark was a doofus, and he'll probably decide that he needs to 'take responsibility,' since Lana won't and HE made the mistake with Mxy that left Lex pregnant. I can imagine him following Lex around trying to protect him and to treat him special and to drive him crazy.

The fun thing about Mxy is that he lets me spork the characters for the dumb shit they do. Too bad Lois doesn't remember what happened with Oliver. He got smacked down by Clark though; I wish they had done that more in the series. What a Gary Stu.

[jakrar]

I can imagine him following Lex around trying to protect him and to treat him special and to drive him crazy.

Any chance of you writing that story? *looks hopeful*

[ladydreamer]

Heheh. Um, when I get to continuing this, there's probably a good chance!

[norwich36]

This is definitely a much more satisfying way of dealing with Lana's non-pregnancy. And I love how you have merged SV canon Mxy with comics canon Mxy, and how (just as in Wendi's stories) Mxy kind of has a crush on Chloe.

But did Mxy make the baby Clark's, I wonder?

[ladydreamer]

Wendi's? I haven't read but it's nice that others are interpreting what little we got of him similarly. Mxy is too fun!

At this point, I'm not sure what Mxy did with the baby, but I am sure he would be amused to let Lex think it was Lana's when it isn't. He's a very strange fairy godfather. >:)

[norwich36]

Wendi, aka happyminion, wrote a whole Chloe-centric series long ago (before we got Mxy in canon) in which Mxy had a crush on Chloe, although that was just one or two stories in the series--mostly she was married to Wally West. They're all offline now, but I think Ender has them all archived.

[danceswithgary]

What great fun! You had me laughing aloud more than once, yet you left us with a woobie Lex. I hope you find time for the sequel soon.

[ladydreamer]

So do I. This one has a lot of promise to be very fun... Thank you! :D