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ladydreamer

You Make Me Sick, Part Two

Feb 24, 2007 18:57

Title: You Make Me Sick
Pairing: Clex
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Clark is finally out of the asylum and living with Lex as he recovers. Lex, however, has problems of his own to contend with.
Spoilers: Through S6 Labyrinth.
Warnings: Totally AU. Dark and possibly triggering for folks with depression. WIP

Part One

Part Two:
( Mercy stormed into the room and pulled the two men apart, her nostrils wide in rage. Lex looked up with swollen eyes and wiped a hand ashamedly across his cheek. )

you make me sick, fanfiction

Comments 27

danceswithgary February 25 2007, 02:12:35 UTC

This is an incredible storyline. You've pulled me right in and I can't wait to see where Clark and Lex go next.

ladydreamer February 25 2007, 05:49:32 UTC

Thank you very much. :)

cinderella81 February 25 2007, 02:18:00 UTC

Very good ... I'm really enjoying this ... even if it is angsty ... I just wanna hug Lex and Clark!!

ladydreamer February 25 2007, 05:53:33 UTC

*hugs them both* Thanks, sweets.

ladydey February 25 2007, 02:25:15 UTC

You've got to love that in every world Lionel is a bastard to his son and just evil.

Aww, it's so sad that Lex is so depressed, I can see why he would especially with so many things working against any kind of mental health - all the problems with Clark and all the non-help from Lionel.

Martha - I just don't get her. I think you captured, in more detail, the Martha that Labyrinth showed - kind of out of touch; having much too much faith in Lionel, of all people; and vaguely distant from all things but her new family with Lionel.

It's really interesting that Martha is keeping Lucas - so since he's Lionel's and Martha's does that mean that he doesn't have the eyebrows?!? - away from Lex. Does she really think that depression is catching? pbbt! What a crappy support system Lex and Clark have.

If you wind up hooking Lex and Clark together, I can see why they would start their own family well away from Lionel and Martha.

ladydreamer February 25 2007, 06:22:52 UTC

Yeah, I think that the utter lack of support system is what's really the problem here. It's so important in cases of medical problems or mental illness and their family really just sucks here.

Lol. I dunno about the eyebrows. Maybe his fruity older brothers will teach him the glorious uses of tweezers or maybe waxing. Martha has some funny ideas about Lex's condition. Lionel could set her straight, but he doesn't care to.

roxymissrose February 25 2007, 02:29:35 UTC

This is killing me and I can't stop reading. Your warning is pretty much on point. Please update soon!

ladydreamer February 25 2007, 06:23:42 UTC

I had to add that warning. I have to take breaks from this story because I trigger myself writing it.

I'll try to keep going in a somewhat timely manner.

arianstarr February 25 2007, 02:43:07 UTC

Excellent update :) Love that you've left them holding on to each other twice now.

ladydreamer February 25 2007, 06:25:19 UTC

Well, who else are they going to hold onto? Thank you. :D