Title: A Change in My Life, chapter six
Fandom: Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego?
Rating: T/PG-13
Word Count: 5,932 (figures. I worry that it's still too short and then discover this....)
Main Characters: Fictional Rockapella
Summary: Further meetings ... all while their enemy continues to work at keeping them estranged.
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And yay Elliott joining them! But waaah at poor Jeff! ;___;
Ah, and the recalcitrant twerps strike again. XD;
And El feeling embarrassed... and wondering if Scott didn't exchange info with him on purpose... ;___; And Scott wondering the reverse... ;___; And waah at him having that dream again! ;___;
And aurgh! **yells at the doppelganger** Showing him that memory... **hugs Scott**
Urgh, and him making Elliott remember that, and poor confused Elliott pushing Scott away.... ;____; And then Scott remembering it, too... ;___; And El remembering LA... ;____;
**but snerks at Sean's reply to the query if everyone's gone mad**
Waah at Scott wondering if he and Elliott were friends. ;____; But yay for El knowing that they do! ^o^
Yay glomp and squee and knowing that they're brothers! ^O^
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;___; Lots of hurt in this chapter. **hugs them all.** But I wanted squee to quickly follow. X3
I'm no longer sure if Jeff should get badly hurt, though, because the further the chapters go, it's more clear that both he and Mr. Gordon have problems with the other; it's not a one-way thing. And if Jeff is badly hurt to guilt-trip Mr. Gordon, that could make it look like Jeff was always in the right.
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argg why would the spirit do something so cruel to remind them both of their loss of body control
squees at what El says to Scott and Scott saying he loves him back
thank you so much for putting up another chapter I'm bummed because a concert that I was going to go to in the city I live in got postponed last week
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Ugh! ;___; **hugs.** So disappointing!
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So many problems. ;___;
I wanted the spirit to try to use that ploy, but I didn't want it to be a problem that would go on for a while. X3
^O^ Hopefully it won't take as long to write the next one.
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