A Change in My Life, 6/?

Aug 11, 2009 23:43

Title: A Change in My Life, chapter six
Fandom: Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego?
Rating: T/PG-13
Word Count: 5,932 (figures. I worry that it's still too short and then discover this....)
Main Characters: Fictional Rockapella
Summary: Further meetings ... all while their enemy continues to work at keeping them estranged.

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rose_of_pollux August 12 2009, 12:32:32 UTC
**snerks at Sean's choice of song** Only Sean... XD

And yay Elliott joining them! But waaah at poor Jeff! ;___;

Ah, and the recalcitrant twerps strike again. XD;

And El feeling embarrassed... and wondering if Scott didn't exchange info with him on purpose... ;___; And Scott wondering the reverse... ;___; And waah at him having that dream again! ;___;

And aurgh! **yells at the doppelganger** Showing him that memory... **hugs Scott**

Urgh, and him making Elliott remember that, and poor confused Elliott pushing Scott away.... ;____; And then Scott remembering it, too... ;___; And El remembering LA... ;____;

**but snerks at Sean's reply to the query if everyone's gone mad**

Waah at Scott wondering if he and Elliott were friends. ;____; But yay for El knowing that they do! ^o^

Yay glomp and squee and knowing that they're brothers! ^O^

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ladybug_tales August 13 2009, 04:38:22 UTC
XD

;___; Lots of hurt in this chapter. **hugs them all.** But I wanted squee to quickly follow. X3

I'm no longer sure if Jeff should get badly hurt, though, because the further the chapters go, it's more clear that both he and Mr. Gordon have problems with the other; it's not a one-way thing. And if Jeff is badly hurt to guilt-trip Mr. Gordon, that could make it look like Jeff was always in the right.

Thanks!

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i_heart_rocka August 12 2009, 13:00:15 UTC
waah reminders of the Angel fic

argg why would the spirit do something so cruel to remind them both of their loss of body control

squees at what El says to Scott and Scott saying he loves him back

thank you so much for putting up another chapter I'm bummed because a concert that I was going to go to in the city I live in got postponed last week

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ladybug_tales August 13 2009, 04:40:19 UTC
The spirit is one of the cruelest beings they'll ever encounter. ;__; But yay for squee and Elliott refusing to be taken in by his ploys!

Ugh! ;___; **hugs.** So disappointing!

Thanks!

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i_heart_rocka August 16 2009, 14:10:39 UTC
*hugs back* there's like a couple of weeks left in summer and I'm just going to try to make the best of it

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ladybug_tales August 13 2009, 04:42:25 UTC
XD

So many problems. ;___;

I wanted the spirit to try to use that ploy, but I didn't want it to be a problem that would go on for a while. X3

^O^ Hopefully it won't take as long to write the next one.

Thanks!

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