REVISED AND EXPANDED: Alive Beneath the Snow, 4/5

[ladybug_tales]

Title: Alive Beneath the Snow, chapter four
Fandom: Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego?
Rating: T/PG-13
Word Count: 5,562
Main Characters: Fictional Rockapella (Sean, Scott, Elliott, Barry)
Supporting Characters: Greg
Summary: The days wear on and everyone starts to wear down.

Will be posted to 10_hurt_comfort.

Comments

[rose_of_pollux]

Ooh, such a mix of emotions in this chapter... The one-sided conversations were so saaad, especially Elliott's! ;___; But yay for him and Barry only getting a warning!

And Mrs. P and the other agent worrying was a nice touch. X3

But poor Scott and his nightmare! ;___; (Wow, Schwemphf in your timeline is even nastier than Schwemphf in my timeline... o.o). And yay for Sean waking up to talk to Barry! X3

Happy endings all around! ^O^

[ladybug_tales]

;____;

X3

(I suppose. XD Though I wouldn't have thought of making him so nasty if not for yours. I probably would have kept him a pompous idiot to be defeated by Greg and the guys, LOL.)

^O^!

Thanks!

[rose_of_pollux]

Yay expansions! Aww... **hugs the Scott and El cuteness** It worked very well ^^

[ladybug_tales]

I just knew I really wanted that scene with Scott and El. ^O^

Thanks!

[i_heart_rocka]

I really love how you expanded this

Arggg Schwempf *flicks him hard*

Yay Sean came back *hugs him*

[ladybug_tales]

Thanks! Me too. :) I'm not sure if I'm done yet, but I wanted to get up what I had.

And Scott and El sharing a room means this is after the Angel fic and its follow-up, but I decided to go with it anyway. XD;

**flicks him too!**

Yay Sean! ^^ **hugs him also.**

[cskazaam]

Poor guys! It must be so tough to keep up hope when the doctors still can't say whether he'll be alright. ;___;

Awww, poor El! **hugs him!** But I really like the little glimpse into how he and Sean met. X3

And awww, it's nice to know that even Mrs. P is worried! ^^

Man, it must be so hard for Scott trying to step in to be the leader and stay strong for the others. ;___; **hugs him!**

Yay for Sean waking up! X3 It must've been some kind of miracle, if the machine wasn't even recording any brain activity!

LOL @ Sean saying no one would be around to throw snowballs or rubber fish. XD It's great to hear him finally back to his old self! X3

LOL @ Mr. Incredible. XD

Such an awesome and intense chapter! X3

[ladybug_tales]

Totally! ;___;

**cuddles him too.**

I like showing glimpses of Mrs. P. maybe being a bit kind deep down. X3

**hugs Scott too.** ;___; Definitely a heavy burden!

**nodnod.** Oh yeah! I've read about real cases where stuff on that order has happened, and I decided it would be perfect for here. X3

Yay Sean back to his old self! ^O^

Thanks!

[cskazaam]

Oooh, I didn't know that sort of thing really happened. o.o Awesome! And totally perfect for the story. X3

[ladybug_tales]

Yep! ^^ And then there was my own experience when the doctors wanted us to pull the plug on my Grandma. I was too young to be involved in the decision, but I distinctly remember crouching down because I was tired and listening to the doctor explain things and my family refusing to pull the plug. And my Grandma did improve afterwards and lived for a year and a half more. X3 (I think.... **tries to remember exactly when that was.**)

I used to crouch down a lot at the hospital. I don't know how I did it. XD; **can barely stand to keep the position for a couple of minutes now.**