He's Not a Man Anymore, 8/9

Mar 02, 2009 07:44

Title: He's Not a Man Anymore (a.k.a., The Lycanthropy Case), chapter eight
Fandom: Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego?
Rating: T/PG-13
Word Count: 6,634
Main Characters: Fictional Rockapella
Supporting Characters: Greg
Summary: The climax.

Will be posted to 10_hurt_comfort.

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he's not a man anymore, where in the world is carmen sandiego?

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rose_of_pollux March 3 2009, 00:08:34 UTC
LOL at them trying to prepare Jeff about the ghost! XD

And ooh, major confrontation with the guy in the wolf costume! (**still has to snerk at Sean abandoning the countdown**)

**yells Haddockisms at Vivalene and the hypnotist** Yikes at her plan... ;__;

And ooh, the chase was so intense... the doppelganger trying to taunt them, and then the car... But yay for them winning! ^o^

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ladybug_tales March 3 2009, 03:09:57 UTC
XD

;___;

I had a lot of fun writing the whole battle scene. X3 But out of everything I tried to remember to include, I forgot to have them find that blasted plastic sword. XD;

Thanks!

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cskazaam March 22 2009, 07:37:55 UTC
Ooh, that was an intense showdown! I was wondering whether the werewolf would turn out to be real or some elaborate costume. XD **and snickers at some of Sean's comments.** LOL.

Ha, I knew the hypnotist was in on it! XD Ooh, but having him be the mastermind behind everything was a neat twist. And so was Vivalene having a real wolf! **wonders where she got it.**

Wow. That was really close with Sean and Barry holding the wolf back from going after the others! And that must have been a really intense ten minutes. o.o

Poor El! I wonder what else they might have in store for him?

Can't wait to read the next part! ^^

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ladybug_tales March 22 2009, 07:54:57 UTC
XD I really didn't want a real werewolf, but I did consider it for a few minutes.

I decided having a real wolf would be a good tie-in. X3

Yeah, definitely intense! o.o

Thanks!

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