He's Not a Man Anymore, 7/?

[ladybug_tales]

Title: He's Not a Man Anymore (a.k.a. The Lycanthropy Case), chapter seven
Fandom: Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego?
Rating: T/PG-13
Word Count: 6,100
Main Characters: Fictional Rockapella
Summary: The guys set about attempting to bring Vivalene down.

Will be posted to 10_hurt_comfort when complete.

Comments

[rose_of_pollux]

Oooh, poor El, having the story spread around, and wondering whether he should be put away... ;__; **but snerks all the same at Sean telling the doctor so casually that he was thrown by the wolf** XD Only Sean...

And LOL at the herd of elephants and him ordering everyone to come out of the room!

And yay for an alliance with Jeff! X3 LOL at the purloined chicken bite, too. **snerks**

And poor Elliott, putting up with Vivalene stringing them along... **yells Haddockisms at her** Trying to turn Elliott against the others... **hugs him** Little does she know that it will never work!

**snerks at Sean and the "lady" joke**

[ladybug_tales]

;__; **hugs El.** That would be so awful, to have to wonder if your allies thought you should be put away.

Somehow the elephant nonsense sounded like something Vic would say. LOL.

Vivalene always manages to be so cruel. ;___;

Thanks!

[i_heart_rocka]

wow what an intense chapter *starts getting good vibes about Jeff*

strange plan though (now I really hate Vivalene)

[ladybug_tales]

Thanks! Yay Jeff! :) He'll be fun to have around as a guest-star now and then....

Sean comes up with strange plans alright. LOL. Though if Vivalene wasn't so smooth, it might have worked. She's a nasty one.

[i_heart_rocka]

yeah totally

[cskazaam]

Man, El defintely doesn't need that girl to be telling everyone what happened! Though I do feel rather sorry for her, when she liked him so much. **imagines what that must've felt like.** Sounds like El should really have a talk with her once all this is over!

LOL @ the "herds of elephants"!

**blinks.** I can't believe Jeff would actually want to eat the food! I mean, it's *Vivalene's.* **shudders.** XD

I like the backstory you created for Jeff! And how Elliott's willing to forgive him. ^^

Ugh, it's too bad Vivalene didn't fall for their plan! **headdesks @ them forgetting about the clothes.** ....Though I didn't remember either. XD;

Yay for El standing up to Vivalene! She really needs to be taken down a few notches. Hopefully they'll be able to get some information out of her!

Can't wait for the next part! ^^

[ladybug_tales]

Yeah, they'll be talking. **thinks she's around thirteen or so.** It's a scene I've been planning since chapter 1.

XD

LOL.

I wasn't sure whether Jeff should open up there or not, but I decided maybe he would, both because he actually likes the ACME detectives and because he realized he went too far in the cemetery. And I decided Elliott would forgive him, too. X3

XD She wouldn't have fallen for it in any case, since she does know the truth.

**hugs El.**

Thanks!