He's Not a Man Anymore, 5/?

[ladybug_tales]

Title: He's Not a Man Anymore (a.k.a., The Lycanthropy Case), chapter five
Fandom: Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego?
Rating: T/PG-13
Word Count: 6,797
Main Characters: Fictional Rockapella (Sean, Scott, Elliott, Barry)
Summary: Vic the Slick does not prove to be a great deal of help. The guys tail Vivalene.

Will be posted to 10_hurt_comfort when complete

Comments

[i_heart_rocka]

oooo intense (even though I already saw the blurb part) but the extra stuff added bonus!

[ladybug_tales]

Thanks! I did alter some stuff in the blurb part, since the stuff before it ended up being a bit different than I'd imagined, but most of it did play out the same.

[i_heart_rocka]

Yeah but this one is so much better

(Thank you for putting up another chapter I woke up sobbing this morning because of what WMG is doing but this cheered me up)

[ladybug_tales]

I think so too. ♥

I'm especially glad I was able to get it up today, then! :)

Ugh, WMG is being such an unbelievable pain. Why can't they learn the difference between the theme songs? -___-;

[rose_of_pollux]

LOL, you wrote Vic perfectly! XD But poor Elliott, being forced to hear all of that... ;__; But LOL at the gold (plated) watches and his annoyance at Joey Joey! XD

Aww, Vivalene is just... gah! Taunting!

But oooh, poor El... ;__; And everyone else seeing that creature, and Scott wondering if he was betraying El by asking if it was him... ;__; **hugs everyone** And the conversation where Scott wishes that he was more like Sean was so saaaad.... ;__;

And poor El, thinking that he transformed again and finding the doppelganger... ;__; Love how you expanded the blurb part, though!

And ooh, Scott begging for El's forgiveness... ;__;

But yay squee!

[ladybug_tales]

X3 Yeah, I'm really happy with how Vic came out!

**hugs poor El.** ;__;

Originally I was going to have Vic say something about wanting to recruit Joey Joey to help him. LOL. But then I thought it'd be funnier (and probably more IC) if he hated the guy's guts. XD

**flicks Vivalene.** Bad Vivalene!

;___; I hadn't intended things to get so angsty, but it ended up happening that way because I could tell that Scott was worried already, and then it all unfolded in the chapter.

**hugs El and Scott.** X3

Thanks!

[cskazaam]

**snickers at Vic offering Elliott a wedding ring.** Poor El! Vic didn't seem to help much at all. XD;

LOL @ Vic making such a fuss about Joey Joey! **and snickers at the thought of Greg having bought so much of his junk.** XD

Oooh, Sleepy Hollow sounds like a really creepy place at night!

Poor El, running off like that! Oh wow, and I totally didn't expect Scott to get attacked by the wolf! o.o I'm glad he got away alright! And that would be horrible, being torn between thinking that it was El or not. ;__;

That whole encounter with the wolf and the imposter was so intense! Poor guys. **hugs them all.** And the part where El thought he really was the werewolf, and Scott asking for El's forgiveness was so heartbreaking. ;__;

Awww, I love the hug near the end! X3

[ladybug_tales]

XD Yeah, Vic was just there to make things interesting. **and is amused by the thought of him having a rivalry with Joey Joey.**

**nodnod.** Sleepy Hollow would totally be a disturbing place! Especially between The Legend of Sleepy Hollow and a rabid werewolf on the loose. o.o

;___; I hadn't actually intended for Scott to end up so conflicted like that, but it just happened. And then it spiraled into him pleading forgiveness. ;__;

Yay hug! X3

This is definitely one of my favorite chapters. ♥

Thanks!

[cskazaam]

**snickers.** Yeah, I'll bet he wishes all he had to do was promote things on TV to get sales! XD

**nods.** Totally! Not a nice place to be wandering around alone!

;__; Poor Scott!

Yeah, mine too! ♥ It was so intense. I even thought that the imposter was actually Scott at the beginning, before he started acting strange! **imagines how horrible it would have been from El's position.**

[ladybug_tales]

Yep! Deep down, he's probably really envious.

**nodnod.** He completely trusted the impostor and then suddenly got "stabbed".... ;__; **hugs El.**