Lay It Down For Someone to Keep, 1/1

[ladybug_tales]

For i_heart_rocka's birthday today. Happy Birthday! I hope you like this. And I hope it doesn't sound too rushed.... Some parts I may want to expand on later, if I can think how to do so

Comments

[rose_of_pollux]

Ooh, poor Scott and that dream! Indeed, with them being that close, it definitely meant something.

And gah, the next day is just worse! Not being able to get through to him, and then Elliott coming back like the Dying Informant... and poor Scott being on the other side of it for once, with Barry, Sean, and Greg also there. *hugs them all* Elliott reaching for Scott before passing out... ouch,

(I am darkly amused that Double Trouble once hid in those islands, and now they just took the islands. In case they need an instant hiding spot that has lots of parties going on)

Yay, he's awake and the twins are caught! And aww, Sean and Barry giving them some time to talk... they're so nice like that. :)

I was also thinking of your Bugatti fic and how this situation with Elliott paralleled it, and then they brought it up as the reason why Elliott had been crying out! Gah!

Ooh, i like the deep talk about wondering whether they should quit, and how it's tempting to when one of them is hurt. *hugs them* But yes, they are loyal to the Chief and to the cause.

And yay, Elliott can be released! And yes, they will all be okay. *hugs them all again*

And ooh, new song! Yay! Best way to end it!

[insaneladybug]

Yep.

Poor everyone! **hugs them!**

(LOL.)

Yep, I could see them doing that!

... I think people are getting hit by cars too much, LOL. I wanted something that could be serious but ended up not being too bad and that was the first thing that came to mind. Then while I was writing I remembered first the other fic where Elliott got hit and then the Bugatti one. And ... oh dear, there was also Falling Down Like Dominoes. **headdesk.** But oh well, the parallel does work.

Indeed. And they probably will always stay.

Yay squee ending! The final talk and the song bit was added later. I always seem to end up making fics like these longer than their first drafts.

Thank you!

[rose_of_pollux]

I completely forgot about Dominos. *headdesk* Oops.

*nodnod* Yeah.

The final talk was definitely awesome and fit great!

Also yay, nice icon! Oooh, everyone looks great! I'm glad you found an S1 pic that worked!

[insaneladybug]

LOL. Yeah, so many.

Yay!

Thanks! Yeah, that's another from The Disappearing Declaration.