but i have computer only at this time of the day, mine dies on me so this is my hubby laptop!
i must be writing for reverse trekbang!!!
but i had real problems with the nude?? what do you think about the thing is wrong in the mission it is not explain???
like jt beam down, but not re appear until 1 hour later, no explanation what so ever??? could work? so then we have the jt is strange something happening to him, and even him don't know nothing, so no way to fix it!???
like we present characters, all works somehow and "then ...."
he beams down but he is lost for an hour (now naked to add ;) and reappear different not explanation whatsoever so we go directly to
everybody wonders what happens, because something is odd... so odd happening and then we have how they try to fix it and the finale???
could it work?????
or i need to go with what exactly happens (so torture or brain washing, or the thing i could not think of) to get from "then...." to the consequences of "then..."
Ahhhhhh, I get you! Well, it's difficult to say without knowing what tone you're going for. If you want something more lighthearted I'd definitely just skip over whatever happens in the middle and present naked!Kirk with no immediate explanation. XD If you're going for something a little more serious/darker, though, then either one would work; either show what happens and deal with the inevitable angst, or skip over it and have Kirk be all terse and uncommunicative.
Which it just another way of saying that I think either one could work. XD
well it will be angsty, but really i don't want to go with the physical torture first, for staters there is too much of torture out there, and finally the consequence is sufficiently angsty i think to see more angst because Jim will return no being himself anymoreor maybe at the end could return, i'm not sure! i have only 2400 words
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but i have computer only at this time of the day, mine dies on me so this is my hubby laptop!
i must be writing for reverse trekbang!!!
but i had real problems with the nude?? what do you think about the thing is wrong in the mission it is not explain???
like jt beam down, but not re appear until 1 hour later, no explanation what so ever???
could work?
so then we have the jt is strange something happening to him, and even him don't know nothing, so no way to fix it!???
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Because if that's what you're saying I approve of that idea. O.O
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but it is a good idea to do it that way too!!!
i thinking in the motor of the story!
like we present characters, all works somehow and "then ...."
he beams down but he is lost for an hour (now naked to add ;) and reappear different not explanation whatsoever so we go directly to
everybody wonders what happens, because something is odd... so odd happening and then we have how they try to fix it and the finale???
could it work?????
or i need to go with what exactly happens (so torture or brain washing, or the thing i could not think of)
to get from "then...." to the consequences of "then..."
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Which it just another way of saying that I think either one could work. XD
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because Jim will return no being himself anymoreor maybe at the end could return, i'm not sure! i have only 2400 words
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