Abandon Shape

[ladyblahblah]

Title: Abandon Shape
Author: ladyblahblah 
Fandom: RPS
Pairing: Chris Pine/Zachary Quinto (Pinto!)
Rating: Rish
Disclaimer: Sadly, this is all a lie.  Probably.  I have no reason to believe that any of it is true, in any case, though I wouldn't be heartbroken to discover that it was.
Summary: It's a dance, you see.  Forward and back, towards and away again.  But it

Comments

[ontophantoms]

I know what it is. Nyah nyah.

But I will not be spoiling it for everybody else.

[ontophantoms]

Also, HAWT.

[ladyblahblah]

Hee, thanks! XD Person number one has gotten it!

So what do you think, does it read right for the song? I had it on constant repeat on my iPod when I was writing it, so my perception may be slightly skewed.

[ontophantoms]

It does. It started playing in my head at the end of paragraph 2. And then my reading was remarkably close to the tempo of the song; I kept hitting hints just as those bits played in my head. :lol:

[kungfunurse]

Arg! You evil woman, I too must sleep the desperately needy sleep of the public servant. How dare you put this luscious story up just as I'm heading to bed??

Sadly, I must wait to read until tomorrow. *shakes her tired fist*

[ladyblahblah]

I am made of evil, it's true. -_-

I feel like I should be tired, but . . . I'm not . . . this is gonna bite me in the ass tomorrow, I can already tell.

[ninjaboots]

Mwaha, Pinto slash! \0/

Also, hot. I like the anticipation and the slow-building burn throughout, and I like the way you managed to echo the build-up of tension between the rising acknowledgement of the club and the physical rush to orgasm against the wall. Luuuurvely.

I have no idea what song this might be, as I have no idea what music you listen to. Truefax.

[ladyblahblah]

Pinto slash out of nowhere!

This was actually, ridiculously enough, almost a K/S fic. XD But I couldn't quite picture any situation wherein Spock would condescend to hang out at a club or club-like venue, and Pinto was all, "Oooh! Oooh, pick us, pick us!"

Very glad you liked it. ^_^ And I listen to aaaaaaall kinds of music. [/unhelpful]

[lalazee]

..........HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNGGG WAT

This was live being swept away with the tide, I had no choice but to follow. MMFF, this was so emotional and ragged and sexy. Loved EVERY MINUTE of it.

He says something, and you answer back, but that’s not the real conversation going on right now.

That was my favourite line. I love innuendo that's almost not even innuendo, if that makes any sense. Just kind of skims the edges of the desire. YESYES. Thank you for this!

[ladyblahblah]

Heeee, thanks! :D This is actually my first Pinto fic outside of drabble form, so I'm excited that it actually worked! So glad you enjoyed it!

[easilymused1956]

You don't need to know the song for the story to work. Seriously. It's perfectly gorgeous all on its own.

I want to write RPS in AOS. Just don't want to embarrass myself with the epic fail I know it would be.

So I read stories like yours.

Renee