Comments | ladyblack888: always fanfics

ladyblack888

Jul 19, 2004 22:32

Tee hee! A 508 word-long blow-job. Remus just thinks too much.

Edit: beta-ed version by ghostlyvioletTitle: Black Ice ( Read more... )

Comments 17

turnedskyward July 19 2004, 15:10:16 UTC

I love that last big paragraph. This has the potential to be something really really good if you have someone beta it. Seriously, I love the idea.

ladyblack888 July 19 2004, 15:17:36 UTC

Thanks! Yes, I have to have this beta-ed.

remus_black July 19 2004, 15:16:23 UTC

Brilliant. V.original, and v.yummy. I love the way Sirius's eye colour's described... just brilliant! :)

ladyblack888 July 19 2004, 15:18:22 UTC

Thank you so much!

shinigamu July 19 2004, 15:41:36 UTC

Glee! I usually lurk around here but, I love this so much. Neet metaphor.

ladyblack888 July 20 2004, 15:52:10 UTC

Hm, than it's an honour that you commented my fic. Thanks

ex_silverni July 20 2004, 03:22:40 UTC

0_____0

GUH. Seriously, that was very hot. I have nothing further to say, but veeeery nice.

ladyblack888 July 20 2004, 15:52:33 UTC

Thanks.

lovedforaday July 23 2004, 22:02:41 UTC

Nice!

But when he falls, he falls into Sirius’ arms, and he’s glad he didn’t listen to his mother.

Too true.

ladyblack888 July 23 2004, 22:21:45 UTC

thanks, hon, glad you liked it!