Fic: No More

[nerca_beyul]

Title: No More
Fandom: Original
Summary: "It was a pattern that he had, a habit, and the love she had for him obviously wasn’t enough to break it." The story of a woman's fall into abuse, and then her decision to stop it.
Rating: PG-13
Length: 1,000 words
Genres: angst, general, a tad of humor
A/N: My dear

Comments

[throttleneck]

Once you mention my name, you know I'll probably comment. XD

Now, ZOMG THIS IS AMAZING! It's simple, short, angsty, and it grabs attention!

She came back around towards him with fire in her eyes and fight in her heart.

That's probably my favorite line! Bravo!! =)

[nerca_beyul]

Well, duh. Why do you think I put your name on there anyway? XD

Thank you. :)

That's my favorite line too.

[odakota_rose]

Wow.. I absolutely love that, that there's a reason to fight and that she did.
You did an amazing job with this and I'm going to save it in case any of my friends ever have a situation like this. There is never a good excuse for someone to cause another human pain.

[nerca_beyul]

It's kind of sad that people go through this and never even think about standing up to fight. *shakes head*

Thank you. While I wouldn't want to put anybody through anything like this, I do hope that it helps someone. :)

[odakota_rose]

Yeah.. or when you look at someone and know what's happening, but they won't admit it..

I think it will, you're a great writer :)

[nerca_beyul]

Exactly. Denial only keeps people stuck where they are, but they don't realize it...

Thank you. :)