some old poems and stuff (porfolio maybes)
Walmart, Alone, Saturday Night.
Look, promises everywhere
Florescent bulbs and signs proclaiming
“new” and “cheap” and “just for you”
Just for you, you lonely sap you.
I nearly cried.
A man and a woman in a long coat
He said something about candy: if she wanted, she ought to get some.
She smiled and said “no.”
They were in love
I have no coat
No shelter
I will take the candy, I will take it all and
I will come up empty handed.
Water Unkind
Rain falls softly; I fall
Slowly
For once, I am
Am real; if you want me to be
Your words were honest
Cruelly so, this poison is a memory
My best, best memory
Pour my soul onto the pavement
That is how I feel
this is what I have so far. of roughly 200 poems, I have two that are worth looking at....
so, opinions?
I really want to be in the creative writing capstone and I have no idea how I'm going to come up with a portfolio. Anyway, help me. If these are going in, they have to be strong...
Look, promises everywhere
Florescent bulbs and signs proclaiming
“new” and “cheap” and “just for you”
Just for you, you lonely sap you.
I nearly cried.
A man and a woman in a long coat
He said something about candy: if she wanted, she ought to get some.
She smiled and said “no.”
They were in love
I have no coat
No shelter
I will take the candy, I will take it all and
I will come up empty handed.
Water Unkind
Rain falls softly; I fall
Slowly
For once, I am
Am real; if you want me to be
Your words were honest
Cruelly so, this poison is a memory
My best, best memory
Pour my soul onto the pavement
That is how I feel
this is what I have so far. of roughly 200 poems, I have two that are worth looking at....
so, opinions?
I really want to be in the creative writing capstone and I have no idea how I'm going to come up with a portfolio. Anyway, help me. If these are going in, they have to be strong...