It's getting interesting. Very smart to use the pin instead of the key. Good idea too to dwell a little on Eloise's anguish. It is quite a nasty situation she has gotten herself into after all.
The only thing I wonder about is, considering the six previous wives are obviously dead for a while, shouldn't the blood, at least on the floor, have dried by now?
But since this is a fairy tale such trivialities are of little consequence.
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The only thing I wonder about is, considering the six previous wives are obviously dead for a while, shouldn't the blood, at least on the floor, have dried by now?
But since this is a fairy tale such trivialities are of little consequence.
I'm looking forward to the conclusion. :)
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