Aw~ That was amazing! I was literally on the edge of my seat. You may have thought it was cliche but I thought it was done perfectly and so what I was looking for in a prompt. The last little bit just had me. I knew he was doing it for Usopp but seeing him just basically say it...just awesome. Thank you so much.
It's not so much that I thought it was cliche, as I worried it was. I am SO GLAD you liked this; I have literally been worried all day about posting it, so your comment is SUCH a relief. I'm glad it turned out the way you wanted, too; I was afraid I'd strayed too far from the 'smut or fluff' guidelines for the request. THANK YOU. ^_^ *can relax about it, now*
I might have to write you Zoro's side of it later, was thinking [very vaguely] about doing the companion and calling it 'tribulations' (it seemed to fit), because I KNOW his motivations the whole way through this, but I couldn't outright state them, because it's basically Usopp's POV, and he wouldn't know. Hmm. Might actually do it, now. ;)
Why thank you~ ^_^ I was really worried about posting it, so it helps a lot to hear you liked it. ;)
"If you manage to kill me, you'll have to become the best swordsman in the world for me. With my swords. I made a promise..."
So, here's the funny thing; that concept? Is totally the only reason I didn't delete this ages ago (was embarrassed with it). Bit me pretty hard too (would you believe I already have a half-done variation on my pc?). I've got NO problem with competition, though, so go for it - just give me a nod when you write it, so people don't think I stole your idea, since lord knows I'll probably take longer than you finishing it! LOL I'm seriously curious to see how yours would turn out; mine is easily as melodramatic as the above tripe. ^_^;;
YAY~ :D Thank you~! To be honest, the bunny was biting me so hard I wrote some up last night. I haven't been bitting by a One Piece bunny for ages, so I wanted to take the chance you were going to say yes and start writing :D And don't worry, I always give credit where credit's due.
Haha, no worries; I know what plot bunnies can do to you; you should see the effect my husband has on me - dear lord, he spews plot bunnies at me, just to see me scramble, I swear. (He's given me some pretty awesome ideas along with the crack, though, so I'll forgive him ;)
I'm inclined to say 'show me yours and I'll show you mine' (with or without the obligatory eyebrow waggle ;), but I've gotta put some polish on what I've got so far before I let anyone see it... o_O;; My writing process is not in any way linear or easy to follow; I'm pretty haphazard until I've got a finished product. (I'm pretty haphazard AFTER I have a finished product, too. lol)
Lets see about a beta-trade with each other in a week or so, though; see if we've both got enough to make any sense of. ;) It'll give me a reason to keep on it, in any case; I get distracted so eas- ooh, shiny!
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I might have to write you Zoro's side of it later, was thinking [very vaguely] about doing the companion and calling it 'tribulations' (it seemed to fit), because I KNOW his motivations the whole way through this, but I couldn't outright state them, because it's basically Usopp's POV, and he wouldn't know. Hmm. Might actually do it, now. ;)
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"If you manage to kill me, you'll have to become the best swordsman in the world for me. With my swords. I made a promise..."
. . . *friggin well BRICKED by a plot bunny* can I write that? Please?
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"If you manage to kill me, you'll have to become the best swordsman in the world for me. With my swords. I made a promise..."
So, here's the funny thing; that concept? Is totally the only reason I didn't delete this ages ago (was embarrassed with it). Bit me pretty hard too (would you believe I already have a half-done variation on my pc?). I've got NO problem with competition, though, so go for it - just give me a nod when you write it, so people don't think I stole your idea, since lord knows I'll probably take longer than you finishing it! LOL I'm seriously curious to see how yours would turn out; mine is easily as melodramatic as the above tripe. ^_^;;
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YAY~ :D Thank you~! To be honest, the bunny was biting me so hard I wrote some up last night. I haven't been bitting by a One Piece bunny for ages, so I wanted to take the chance you were going to say yes and start writing :D And don't worry, I always give credit where credit's due.
*wants a speek at that variation*
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I'm inclined to say 'show me yours and I'll show you mine' (with or without the obligatory eyebrow waggle ;), but I've gotta put some polish on what I've got so far before I let anyone see it... o_O;; My writing process is not in any way linear or easy to follow; I'm pretty haphazard until I've got a finished product. (I'm pretty haphazard AFTER I have a finished product, too. lol)
Lets see about a beta-trade with each other in a week or so, though; see if we've both got enough to make any sense of. ;) It'll give me a reason to keep on it, in any case; I get distracted so eas- ooh, shiny!
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