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[lady_jane]

CowLip owns the characters. This is not profiting me.

Written for the "Worlds Apart" challenge at neverenough_bj.

Thank you, jans_intentions, for the beta.

Warning: Brian/other, angst.

Comments

[arrowthroughme]

I'm reading! ... This has been a week from hell so far. I'm about to leave for work again. Just wanted to let you know and I will be back with some feedback, but I might not get to it before the weekend. But I had to let you know.

On top of that I'm really sad about Heath Ledger!

Hugs, Nicki

[lady_jane]

*laughs* I saw this and all I thought was, "wow, that was fast!"

Sorry your week is so tough. And, yeah, Heath, how bizarre! I walk by that building all the time on my way to the gym. I'll have to go by today, I'm sure there's some kind of fan memorial.

[aschicca]

Brian was tactile; he needed to feel Justin under him, on his tongue, in his mouth, between his legs.

I loved this bit. It's perfectly Brian in my mind and... *coughs* it's also a bit arousing *coughs* ;)

I feel sorry for Adam, he is a good guy but unfortunately Brian is not the man to fall in love with. Unless your name is Justin and even then... you need to fight for it.

Gus worries me a lot, I don't know how he'll react to Adam being gone. And I love Michael and Ben in this story. I really like how you fit the others inside the B/J story: the angst and the normal life. I like that.

Can't wait for more.

[lady_jane]

it's also a bit arousing *coughs* ;)

Yeah... getting between Brian's legs is a fascinating little idea, isn't it?

Gus worries me a lot, I don't know how he'll react to Adam being gone.

Yeah, poor Gus.

[koalared]

Oh, this one hurts almost as much as the others, even tho they are connecting on some messed up Brian/Justin level.

I am foremost a B/J fan, I like them as an entity. But if separated I am more of a Justin fan so I'm sure this skews my veiwpoint, and even tho they have BOTH screwed up and misread their relationship it seems to me that Brian has screwed up and misread more than Justin. If they would just be honest with eadh other!

Brian and Adam's fight had me so scared. I was aftaid Brian would take their relationship to the next level to push Justin away and to punish him.

And Lindsey, she was instrumental in having Brian push Justin to New York (I was glad Justin said that to Brian)and then introducing Gus and then Brian to Adam and then scolding Brian about not explaining to Gus about Adam. Lindsey is a putz.

Ok, caffeine rant over. Thanx for the update and have a great day.

[lady_jane]

Brian and Adam's fight had me so scared. I was aftaid Brian would take their relationship to the next level to push Justin away and to punish him.

I think that would be kind of redundant. Plus, this version of Brian, I think, can accept his feelings - and has, for Justin. So when he returned, I don't think Brian would fight them too hard.

I was definitely nicer to Lindsay than I might have been.

[faramirhaldir]

Oh this story makes my stomach hurt, and that is a compliment! I read and just clench, aching for them both. I love this story adn your writing is excellent. You make me feel what they are feeling. Soooo good!

*hugs*
Tena

[lady_jane]

Thanks!

[mistress_tien]

I love they way you've written Justin--in pain when he discovers Brian is "with" Adam; strong when he tells Brian what he wants (sketching him and dropping him off at home); and willing when Brian shows up at his apartment. Each feels so right.

Thanks for sharing!

[lady_jane]

Hurt, strong and willing - yep, that's this fic's Justin! I love that character. But man, he drives me crazy.