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What Doesn't Kill You / Side Story: Leeteuk

Nov 05, 2011 11:31

Title: What Doesn't Kill You / Side Story: Leeteuk
Genre: Superhero AU, action
Rating: PG-13

Chapter 12 < ----- > Chapter 13
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His name was Park Jungsu. He had craters for dimples and an infectious laugh that bordered on maniacal. He was a highschooler that cared more about confessing to the girl in Class 3-B than grades or his future. Park Jungsu was ( Read more... )

fanfiction, band:super junior, character:xmas, character:typhoon, character:donghae, band:trax, character:shindong, title:what doesn't kill you makes you st, character:heechul, character:leeteuk, character:attack, character:rose

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This sucks cereal_strawz November 5 2011, 22:36:51 UTC

You are the worst writer ever. I don't even know why I continue reading. I can't stand this story.

I don't even like Super Junior. They can't sing. Or dance. Especially Sungmin.

This is so unrealistic. And I caught like two typos.
Just stop writing. Stop.

You cut stuff out didn't you? I could tell. It was so obvious. That's probably why it was so incredibly short. I don't understand how someone could post this and attempt to pass it off as a legitimate chapter.

No substance.

The only redeeming quality of this filth is that the fat man died.
Stop writing you hipster-freak.

Re: This sucks lady_hanaka November 5 2011, 22:41:33 UTC

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Re: This sucks cereal_strawz November 5 2011, 22:42:41 UTC

Not yet, I haven't.

Re: This sucks lady_hanaka November 5 2011, 22:44:23 UTC

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Re: This sucks haiiro_ai November 6 2011, 00:33:09 UTC

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Re: This sucks cereal_strawz November 6 2011, 00:39:18 UTC

It's okay... Lady Hanaka didn't like this chapter either :)
She told me so.
We're that close.
That's why I'll get to pants her on television.

Re: This sucks lady_hanaka November 6 2011, 00:42:15 UTC

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Re: This sucks haiiro_ai November 6 2011, 00:52:19 UTC

Heechul was out of his pants-- this chapter had it's perks.
And Lady Hanaka shall be losing her pants?

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Re: This sucks astormisbrewing November 6 2011, 01:16:49 UTC

I always feel left out of these giant gif wars. DX I come back and everyone's pants are gone. This isn't ok, if it isn't Super Junior pantsless. PANTS KYUHYUN. PANTS KYUHYUN. PANTS KYUHYUN.

But it'll never happen.

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Re: This sucks haiiro_ai November 6 2011, 01:43:06 UTC

You aim too low.
STRIP KYUHYUN. STRIP KYUHYUN. STRIP KYUHYUN.

Re: This sucks astormisbrewing November 6 2011, 02:01:52 UTC

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Re: This sucks haiiro_ai November 6 2011, 02:03:48 UTC

Oh my dear Shisus don't get me started on that boy.
http://fyeahkyuhyun.tumblr.com/archive

Re: This sucks astormisbrewing November 6 2011, 02:09:36 UTC

Excuse me for a moment while I gather up the pieces of my fangirl brain.

DO THE CREEP CREEP CREEP.

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