Murder III Chapter 27

[lady_hanaka]

(A\N: Ok so the chapter numbers are off...this IS actually chapter 27, I believe. I repeated a chapter a few chapters back and that's what threw everything into confusion. Hopefully I will get on that this summer...and fix everything. :D Anyway, enjoy!)

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Title: Murder III
Rated M for violence and mature scenes
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Chapter 27
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“Mika-chaaan.” Renjiro

Comments

[astormisbrewing]

PLOT IS COMING! I can sense it. It's there, moving in the background, trying to be all sneaky-like.

... You might have been complaining how this is filler the entire time you were writing it, but this is the stuff I enjoy. The 'leading up to.' The moment when someone thinks they know something right before they screw up royally or go through the awkward motions of romance etc, etc.

Moments like this:

Izaki’s grip tightened on the receiver. “Genji?”

He could hear Genji’s intake of breath as he recognized Izaki’s voice. “Izaki? What is it?”

“Let’s talk.” Izaki murmured, “Meet me at Suzuran in ten minutes.”

Quick but telling without smacking you over the head with meaning. It's a short scene, a very quick interaction that could be extensively analyzed. There's a lot going on here in just three lines. I like that.

And I like that it's about Genji and Izaki, of course.

KICK HIS ASS, TAMAO!! GO GO GO!!!!! SICK 'EM, BOY!!!

*secretly high fives Kang Dae for the dog joke*

And DONG YUL was MENTIONED?! GASP. Kill it.

[lady_hanaka]

Yes, Tamao...and Kang-Dae...that will be a fun, fun, fun scene to write. :D Dong-Yul and Tadao...wow, one of them needs to make an appearance soon and stop kicking the asses of people subtly in the background. XD

And soon, soon...Dong-Yul will indeed die...and it will be glorious...

Izaki+Genji=FUNANGST. Because it will be fun...and it will be angsty...and funangst is fun to say...:D

[tomba249]

Aww. Izaki's father is kind of upsetting. But I guess I can understand why he is so defensive about everything, what with what all has happened to his family with Izaki. Hopefully they'll be able to eventually see eye to eye someday though. Or at least hold a conversation without any kind of stride remarks

[lady_hanaka]

I'm glad you like the layout. :D I'm rather partial to this one myself, and it's very cheerful and happy and that's always fun.

Yes, a lot of tension in this chapter, but hopefully that tension will ease a little with the next one...maybe...XD

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[astormisbrewing]

They're cosplaying as Crows Zero people for all I care. Kibum practically is Serizawa in the second movie. Heechul is both of the twins. I'm going to say Eunhyuk is Tokio just because he looks like Kiritani Kenta in Rookies.

Siwon is the middleschooler whose lunch money is about to become their beer money.

[lady_hanaka]

Haha, indeed, indeed. Poor Siwon...

[cereal_strawz]

GASP